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A Journey With You
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A Journey With You


My love,
Come journey with me,
Shall we travel to ancient lands,
View the wonders of the hidden worlds there?

Shall we lie on the soft veldt of Africa,
Basking in the warmth of the sun?
Will you make love to me?,
Under the stars that shine like
Diamonds in the sky?

Will you feed me exotic fruits?
And drink the fermented grapes,
Crushed by the feet of black haired beauties?

Shall we travel to your home my love?
I’d like to see your world,
Walk in the paths of your life,
Meet the people who shaped you
Into the man I love…

My love,
Will you journey to my mountain with me?
Lay on the bank of my river,
The water is so cool and sweet,
The trees shading you always from
The burning sun…

But the nights my love,
The nights are magical there,
My love,
The wolves sing at night,
It is a lovely sound,
And the moon,
She is so close,
Peering down,
Tilting her lovely head,
She smiles at lovers,
And kisses their souls…

My love,
Come journey with me,
There are so many things,
I would like to show you,
But they would be nothing to me,
With out you by my side…

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 Reviews of "A Journey With You"
Reviewed by Desiree Parson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2007
This poem captured the true essence of romance for me. It is just beautiful. One of the verses is a reflection of the new man in my life.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
I fully agree. Each journey only becomes wonderful once you have somebody by your side.
Great poem.
Nico

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2003
Beautiful romantic write and so true!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
an invitation never to be denied... totally beautiful!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
Reindeer,

Gorgeous imagery and beautiful verses take the reader on a lovely journey.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
The journey you speak of is direct from your beautiful heart and it is reflected well in such a romantic light.
Amor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
One very beautiful write Retta!!

This has magic!!

Loce Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Reindeer, thanks for this trip as seen through the eyes of love, with such clarity of vision, simply beautiful!

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
I love it!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
One magnificent journey!!!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Splendid write.

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
You have out done yourself with this one, excellent.

Nancy

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
One beautiful write!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
There is so much to be seen in your poetry Retta...As always a wonderful journey....ty.....Dani

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Beautifully done, Reindeer.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Reindeer, this is such exquisite poetry

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
well written, maybe I could find someone to take a trip like that with me....

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Reindeer, This promises to be a wonderful journey. Especially loved the last two lines.
Jenni


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