I am looking out at the world today,
From the top of my mountain,
How beautiful the sunset is,
All red and golden…
The clouds are floating by,
And if I reach out I swear I can touch the sky!
Such a beautiful way to end this day,
Just sitting quietly watching the sky slowly fade away…
So strange to think this is the end,
The last day of our friendship,
There have been too many storms
And my heart is aching.
Strange to think how it all begin,
Me saving you from yourself,
Teaching you to think about the things you say.
You’ve come a long way,
But the end is nigh,
And I am going away.
Oh how I remember those dark days,
When it all began…
I never thought I’d have a friend again,
It was far too hard on my heart and spirit,
Far too hard on me-
I didn’t need friends then,
I had my books and writings,
My forest and peace,
I had everything I needed.
Except a friend to share my dreams with,
A friend who cared about me…
(Ah my lovely friend,
You saved me too.)
But the times have changed,
And the hours we share now are so few,
I know its time to let go,
We both have other things to do.
So I will sit here and watch this beautiful day end,
The way our friendship ended,
And then I will say to you,
“So long, farewell my friend,
It’s time I traveled on alone…
This brings tears from the well of my soul, Retta; that is because I can relate so well to what you express via your verses here. Thank you for sharing this soul-reaching gift. Love and peace to you,
Beautiful and heartbreaking poem, Reindeer. Your verses stand alone with or without the challenge line and your images are both intense and tangible. Your writings often take my breath away and this is one of those times.
Take care,
Sherry
Wonderful poem, one I can relate to so well. In fact, I've been writing a poem on saying farewell to someone as well. You make it sound so peaceful, so right. But to me, it is heart-breaking. It seems as though every aspect of life is such a struggle. Even something as simple as friendship. ~ Sara
Saying goodby, farewell, so long, or Get Lost, isn't easy.
But, you make it so tender and meaningful, I almost wish you were my FORMER friend. - That's good work. Sharing it is a morning joy.
- Bill
I'm glad this is not a farewell but a challenge for us to write one that will never be as good as that which you have written. The pic is as beautiful as the poem.
“Being a couple yet free is our next challenge on the evolutionary ladder. This book successfully helps us unravel the myths that block that achievement. It does it with warmth, with readability, and with balance. It recreates everyday problems and
I could use a true friend..
Vesna :)
Beautifully said...
oh so sad. Moving Retta!
peace,
carolyn
Simply beautiful, Retta!
but you have done very good with this write!!!
What a beautiful way to say "farewell". Your poetry is so down to earth and filled with the spirit.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Paul;-)
Nice work
Blue skies and sunshine
HH
Have a great day!
And what a marvelous picture.
Good challenge
enjoyed
William
LOve & Peace
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
A beaut of a soul you do indeed have....
Susan
Regis
~Linda
Take care,
Sherry
Love Tinka
"
But the times have changed,
And the hours we share now are so few,
I know its time to let go,
We both have other things to do.
"
Love,
Eileen
Aberjhani
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
But, you make it so tender and meaningful, I almost wish you were my FORMER friend. - That's good work. Sharing it is a morning joy.
- Bill
This is a wonderful and spontaneous response to the challenge..
Kudos to you
God Bless
Peter