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The Haunted Forest
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
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The Haunted Forest


I wasn’t afraid until the mist rose from the ground,
Covering the earth with ghostly images that floated by me,
Their rain kissed faces haunting me with memories,
I no longer wanted to remember…

I felt her slender fingers trace a wet path across my cheek,
And turned quickly enough to see her floating away,
Her long hair leaving a trail on the damp forest floor…

I was torn,
Wanting to run back the way I had came,
Wanting to call out to her;
“Wait! Please wait for me!”

But if I followed her,
There would be no returning,
Mom always said she would be the death of me…
I wondered if I cared.

Thinking now,
Of where I had been,
Where I wanted to go now that so much had changed,
It’s no fun getting old by your self.

I always loved this forest,
Each long limbed tree has a name,
I know every trail and where it leads by heart.
On long winter nights these woods are haunted-

I saw her peeking from behind a tree,
Her lovely dark eyes met mine,
We had spent our childhood here,
Lay in the long arms of our friends all day,

Talking and dreaming,
Making plans for a future that never happened.
Still, this was the only place I had ever felt at peace.
The only place that we sisters had ever called home.

She smiled at me from behind our favorite tree.
I put my fingers in rough edges of our names,
We had carved so long ago,
They were much higher now,
But still so clear…

I decided to stay.



 

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 Reviews of "The Haunted Forest"
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on June 13, 2018
Just beautiful, as always. Be blessed. Mark

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
Hi retta...just popping in to visit old AD friends and enjoyed reading this wonderful poem.
Susan
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Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Splendid poetic work, two thumbs up I'd say.

Best wishes
HH

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
Magical and mystical words, my friend. Touching poetry! Lydi**

Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Deeply moving poem

Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar
Reviewed on April 28, 2007
Reindeer,
Lovely. Emotional. Moving.
I'm glad I found your work. It will take me awhile to read all your poems, but I'm looking forward to it.
Terry

Reviewed on April 13, 2007
Rhetta,

As always your imagery is captivating, the emotion projected right on cue to the reader and your thoughts and feelings so extremely well conveyed!!! This is beautiful and indeed haunting! So great to be back and read your work again!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
enchanting write, retta. reminds me of my childhood new england woodland & the hypnotic pull of its dusk-tinted hollows.
masterful work.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
The more I read THE HAUNTED FOREST the more I sensed a blessing preparing to emerge out of the shadows of doubt and regret. Then sure enough, there it was: "peeking from behind a tree." Beautiful.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
Pardon me, but OMG!!! Ahem, Rhetta! THIS is more of what we need. I can't even BEGIN to tell you how utterly beautiflly rendered this is; the imagery is explosive in it's subtle undertones that burst into the reader's mind and soul. Be still my heart, indeed!!! Major large sigh... from this admirer of your pen! Happy Easter if you celebrate it. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
How does it feel to get it right every time? As always, you have created a vivid and haunting scene that is both touching and
thought-provoking. Enviable!! 'Pea'xOx

Reviewed on March 29, 2007
hello Reatta, great poetic story. I love the great outdoors also but not at night. things get kind of spooky then

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Yearing for a love one
a beautiful hauting write Retta
most enjoyable piece

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 21, 2007
Oh Retta, this is so poignant, so hauntingly beautiful. I was there. Your words took me with you. This is amazing and so well-written that I had goosebumps as I read. Very well done.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
This is so compelling, Retta, and the narrative speaks so keenly of the nature of the life that was shared with rich images - love the long-limbed trees which I have read as bearing HER name! But, not too far from the truth, I guess. Beautiful ending and the keeness of detail with the tattooed bark being so much higher... Conjures also the distance between adulthood and the child. I was truly drawn into this heartfelt tale. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Heather White (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
That was so sad Rein, I pray everything is okay with you, it's been a while, excellent but tear jerking write

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
This is so masterful you took us along in this journey a refreshing and visual feast. Thank you.

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
Great conclusion, Reindeer. Great to read you again!

Carmen

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Hi Reindeer,

So good to read you again! You are where you need to be ... of this, I'm sure. Blessings.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Retta, this is truly stunning.

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Very good imagery of pure trnquility!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
I could feel the "Spirits" and the emotions........I would of stayed too :-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
you bring the heart of the forest and its impact on you into focus in this beautiful and endearing poem ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
A place of dreams, dreams lost, of childhood fantasy. A place that draws you back time and time again. Beautiful.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
I felt myself holding my breath as I read this in hushed silence. It is full of ethereal beauty Reindeer! You always touch the deepest parts with your poetry!

Eileen

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
There is no end to the beauty that you see and experience as evidenced in this beautiful piece.
Amor

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Your style is so refreshing and easy to breeze through.
The forest of mysteries.

Thanks,
~D.

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Hi Retta
I think this is my first time reading your work, and it is absolutely breathtaking, suspenseful and peaceful at the same time. Beautifully done. Your title caught my attention, as I love writes about hauntings.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Have to agree with Gwen here!!

I am always touched by your writes!!

Love Tinka


Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
So melancholy and beautifully descriptive! Your writing always enchants! Good to read you again! Blessings!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Retta, such a pleasure to read you again. A delightful haunting work. One thing about being alone, you are in the best company of someone who truly appreciates what you can do, and who you are. And you are special. What a terrific picture too.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
The mood and feelings that you have shared via your verses reach into the soul of the reader. Thank you, Retta. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
You decided to stay, being a brave man, I'd have run away, faster than a gazelle.... Beaut work, yup us brits are known for our bravery..lol

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Stunning, captivating and carries the mind off to that forest and the soft voice narrated this poignant story in the mist. Beautiful piece of work Retta.

Fee

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Your words and lines float off the page into our hearts, My Friend.
It is good to see you working, again, and to read another of your deeper poems. Over the years, I recall that you kept getting better, making me wonder about an apex. Now, I know... you don't even know what that means. Lovelly and loving is this poem. - Bill

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Beautiful work Retta!

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed on March 16, 2007
(((Reindeer)))

Where you been, girl? I have missed you so much! Welcome back!

You haven't lost your magical style; very beautiful and poignant write! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Retta,

It is so good to see you posting again. You've been missed.

As for this poem, beautiful imagery and poignancy ring in each line; extremely effective! Well done.

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
you've been gone too, too, long
I love the forest and have been
lost in the forest before. That
is a scary feeling for sure.
Love your work......

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
I love this, Reindeer! felt as if I were walking through the forest with you, alive with wonder and a touch of fear. I found myself reading quickly first time through to see what you would do (follow? stay behind?) and thoroughly enjoyed each image second time around. Dawn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
I always loved this forest,
Each long limbed tree has a name,
I know every trail and where it leads by heart.
On long winter nights these woods are haunted-

I've missed your poems, Reindeer, and I especially like this one since I love the forest as well. And although your forest may be haunted, it holds some wonderful memories, too, and I'm glad to hear that you decided to stay.


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