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Sing-Song Madness
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from awhile back...sing-song reality of some lives, been there, strugglin' still, and so we try and try, yes? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
to/for every 'person, interrupted' when she was still so much alive worried, yes, yet eyes still wide... (something lurked inside ) who was she? just out of her teens when she had (quite awake!) foreseen... foreseen that one day, all would br- eak how? when? why? she could not say, just knew that there would come that day and so, it did! somehow, just knew the time to be Alive! as then would end. was it all so hard to see when one looked back at her-story? no reasons, none that They could find, so puzzled, Docs perplexed, said "She should Not have lost her mind." oh, really? what? oh, sure, okay? Yeah, wish it hadn't flown a w a y! no one knows yet. no one still. no one gets it, least and lastly-- she who was so 'Not' supposed to be so ill!? Oh, that my friends was simply (simply?) a chapter, one... yes, okay. okay! life, as known, had come Un- done! seemed as if it was All-Done... Finis! Goodbye! ( to She who once was Free! ) and thus, all this was to become the grimy grist of-- this, this chapter, one. But, Wait! there is much more that must be said so many chapters to be written, Read! as she is not dead. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 24, 2006

From the ashes,comes the phoenix....
catch that feather
very interesting Micha
pax A

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 23, 2006

Fresh and insightful write chronicleing it seems life's insensitivities.

Fee

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

That's the fear - what's next? Not asked what we want, just given options. Outcomes? Find out for yourself - but what if? Tough. Micha,I've been singing the song of madness for years but can't seem to find the line to jump off or end the tune. I am not dead either, and that's what bothers me - what next? Thanks for sharing your 'madness' I drink from the same bottle - on my own, lonely table.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

I'm convinced that the more we keep positive people around us and the more we see the beauty of our surroundings rather than jist the jungle...the more we survive and heal and become invincable. micha you area true survivor and I've known your resolleincu for years. This poem shows your strength.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

This one has a beautiful and haunting effect of innocence.....
Life it breathes for me.
"as
she
is
not
dead."
Thank You SS.....
Blessings & Peace,
Joselyn