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| Reviewed by c lea harris |
3/17/2013 |
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| held my breath, strange how we dream some of the strangest dreams, then when we wake up to find that it was just a dream, some of them I am glad they are, that's for sure, |
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| Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo |
10/26/2012 |
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This was certainly an interesting story. Kept me glued to the screen with every line. Very descriptive story. Has a bit of humor in it but also depth and much to think about. After I finished reading the story I wanted more. Perhaps you can continue this story further... Oh and now I am inspired to get back into writing short stories and such again. Thank you.
I have noticed you've used the word 'unbelief' in your story. I've never heard of this word before. It should say 'disbelief' instead... |
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| Reviewed by Clarence Prince |
3/9/2012 |
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| "Dead Man Dancing",A story indeed, Regis Auffray! Sweet dream Mr. Livingstone, enjoy your sleep! This is a real nice piece of work, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
2/20/2012 |
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Just a FYI: My sense of humor is non existant and I rarely laugh at anything, not even comedian stand-up routines I like. This really made me laugh. This story was about a man who isn't afraid of and is happy about death.
This story made me think about Charles Dicken's "A Christmas Carol." I don't know why though because there isn't a connection. I thought it was a moral story in a way, but the lesson is subtle. Livingstone has come to grips that he's free from the routine and all the stress of life because he's dead and as a result has no worries.
Some thoughts I had. I thought the main character's name was appropriate and hilarious! I wondered if the main character had perhaps not lived in life so that was why he had the routine and went to work. That part that he went to work I didn't quite get. Keep in mind my lack of a sense of humor. The only reason Livingstone went to work was to cause and get into trouble. Something struck me as off there. Livingstone didn't have to go into work. He's dead. What was the point of him going to the office? He was there to teach his co-workers who were also dead to accept death and be happy about it. His co-workers hadn't come to grips with being dead and weren't happy about it. The problem was Livingstone didn't realize till later in the story that his co-workers were also dead. Why didn't he know that? It's funny that he would rub his own death in the faces of his living co-workers. Still, if everyone is dead, what happened to everyone? Again, that's why I thought this was some moral tale. I thought it was Livingstone's job to teach the other deceased that death was cool. But why would he have such a job? Maybe Livingstone's one of the rare deceased to be at peace with death and they are tasked to bring the other deceased ones over after they're at peace with it.
The ending was off to me too. I didn't get the shadowy figure mentioned. I guess he could have been Hades or the Grim Reaper. Those guys would have fit the humor of the story. The ending made me wonder if Livingstone was dead or not. The beginning said he was and sleep is a euphemism for death. Still it wasn't clear why there was a shadowy figure in Livingstone's sleep. Maybe a sentence to reassure the reader Livingstone is indeed dead. It sounded like the movie "Groundhog Day" where everything repeats. That whole scenario goes with moral tales or it was just supposed to be funny.
Wait a minute here. I've carried on way too far. This was just supposed to be hilarity. Forget all I've said because it'd change everything. Forgive my lacking sense of humor.
Excellent tale. Will use this with my student. |
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| Reviewed by Shoma Mittra |
10/15/2011 |
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| Really enjoyed reading this!Terrific. :-) shoma |
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| Reviewed by J Howard |
10/7/2011 |
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| i read it twice. clever, very clever front to back, start to finish. but...i don't think i will rethink the feeling of "6 feet under!" |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
8/26/2011 |
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What a humorous perspective. Well done. Thank you sir.
Janna |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
8/25/2011 |
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| This was a very clever and creative story, Regis! I loved your images--especially of a dead man driving a car care-free, dancing in his seat to Led Zeppelin! I loved the office interaction and "freedom" and attitude of this dead man. Such funny lines, too! Loved your story! Love and hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Ruan Mills |
6/24/2011 |
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WOW! Great story telling, Regis, this is obviously your strength. I was utterly blown away by this incredible tale that, to me, was about a man completely 'losing it'. Brilliant!
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| Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger |
2/14/2011 |
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| remarkable. |
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| Reviewed by Clarrissa Moon |
12/2/2010 |
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| This was incredable. Thanks for sharing! |
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| Reviewed by Steve Groll |
11/9/2010 |
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| That was fun. What a wild ride! Keep those great stories coming. |
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| Reviewed by Jms Bell |
10/17/2010 |
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TERRIFIC!!! A GEM....SO ENJOYED! I'D LOVE TO SEE THIS ACTED OUT. THANK YOU REGIS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS, LOVE AND FAITH.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Randy Stensaas |
8/27/2010 |
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| great story, I loved it. we all have those dreams and days. |
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| Reviewed by Darkest Angel |
3/27/2010 |
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| This is a very nice tale of freedom in death. I loved it! Thanks for the work in this one. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
9/1/2009 |
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| Regis, This has a "twilight zone" like effect. I was waitng for Rod Serling's end narration. Great stuff. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
8/26/2009 |
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| Yes, I agree with Dallas on this. You are a very good storyteller. I was going to write a story about this very same theme too; but never did. I will now have to start reading more of your short-stories too. Whew! So much great stuff, where does one start? I love the macabre humor thing as you might have ascertained by now. More later. |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson |
6/7/2009 |
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| Through the talent of a great storyteller, you are introduced to a man, who thinks himself dead, and you have to wonder, "If you don't live, are you really alive?" |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
4/13/2009 |
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| I really enjoyed this story, Regis! It is truly imaginative. Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Mark Teague |
4/9/2009 |
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| Well, after all, what is Sanity, besides those bothersome Have-to's Society has pasted on top of our natural Want-to's? This fortunate soul, having at long last realized that, took a little WD-40 and a putty knife, and abandoned those unwanted proscriptions at one feld swoop. But had his freedom come at too great cost? |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
3/31/2009 |
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Regis I enjoyed reading your thought provoking story.
Shall read more on another visit.
Thank you for sharing,
Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Tommy Thomas |
3/30/2009 |
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This is quiet unique in that Rocky woke up dead and experienced a new life after death. So amazing it is that he convinced others that they were dead also and it was a happy time for them all. Good original work. Continue your beautiful writing that keeps the reader thinking.
Tommy |
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| Reviewed by P. G. Shriver |
3/28/2009 |
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Regis,
Weirdness in writing is my true love! The 'death freeing us from normal daily routine' reaches out to a wide audience, I'm certain. This story really makes you ponder whether or not that 'rat race' part of yourself could really die and free your spirit from societal norms. Could I go to work in my pajamas? I'm working on that one! It's an inspirational write.
GP :) |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
11/27/2008 |
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Well written Reg. A fun read. Very clever indeed. Wouldn't we all love to feel that kind of freedom each day? Free from the expectations of others. I particularly liked your word picture of the office workers set in glass cases or partitions, not unlike the zoo. lol
Kind regards J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Hatshepsut Maatkare |
11/17/2008 |
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This was an AWESOME story! You grabbed my attention from the first sentence to the very last. You have a vivid imagination and a sense of humour that shows through your work. Great job!
:) Monica |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
10/9/2008 |
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Sometimes life throws more at us than we can handle and there are those that "snap". That is how I read this story that you have written. Maybe my job makes me feel this way, but I think this write can be taken a few ways. Each will interrupt it the way they see it in their mind. Well done Regis.
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Kathy Lynn |
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| Reviewed by David Pennebaker |
9/5/2008 |
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| FFFantastic. You say Mr. Livingstone is dead, yet you absolutely brought him to life in this story. Great story. |
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| Reviewed by Damien Rickner |
4/13/2008 |
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| Harlem shuffle off that mortal coil. Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by L-M Owens |
12/30/2007 |
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| This is a great piece Regis. It kept my interest and the plot kept me reading to find out if he was dead or just plain crazy. Great "Twilight Zone" feel to it. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/15/2007 |
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| Strong imagination in play here, Regis! Haven't we all wanted to throw that paperweight at one point? Once, I gave the computer screen on my forklift a chicken-wrist strike and it spider-webbed. Bad me. It felt good, though! Glad those days are behind me. I enjoyed this story~ Sheila:) |
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| Reviewed by Jane Pierce |
9/29/2007 |
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| Nice piece of wrighting, Regis. Like this very much. |
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| Reviewed by Annette Hendrix Williams |
9/11/2007 |
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| I am overwhelmed. Thank you for making my day. |
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| Reviewed by David Perry |
8/31/2007 |
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| So ding-dang funny. You're a trip Regis, a rare and true Original. |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
8/13/2007 |
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I like this story Regis... seriously humorous...reminds me of how I have felt about many jobs in my life I have taken...and had no passion for. I believe I have had this dream you have detailed. Now someone wake me up...
Thank You
John |
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| Reviewed by Myles Saulibio |
7/25/2007 |
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Very entertaining, thought provoking, and socially simulating my Friend--
Aloha--Myles |
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| Reviewed by Star West |
7/25/2007 |
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| My gosh this story really makes you stand up and take notice... Its an awesome job, your a great writer. I loved this love **STAR WEST |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons |
6/24/2007 |
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Great story! I very much enjoyed. A dark subject handled with humor. And to be truthful I've so wanted to throw something like that at my bosses a few times in the past. Fortunately I've restrained myself...but then I wasn't dead. :)
Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
6/23/2007 |
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| Great character names. Very interesting write. Enjoyed very much. |
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| Reviewed by Jessica Lark |
4/2/2007 |
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I like the light humorous way you have dealt with this story, however dark the reality may be. And the first line, what a brilliant hook!
All the best
Jessica. |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
3/3/2007 |
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| Wonderful first sentence! And you kept me hooked right to the end. Great character names as well. |
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| Reviewed by Jean Pike |
2/23/2007 |
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| Both delightful and insightful! Enjoyed it much! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
12/28/2006 |
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I must say that I have enjoyed Dead Man Dancing more than any short story that I have read in a long time! I loved it! Great write, hilarious yet morbid, yet also a lesson hidden within the lines. We can't hide our true selves...this would make a KILLER movie. Loved the character, and the ironic twist. Great stuff. Glad that I came over to the short story side this early Thursday morning...going to have to stop by more often!
Blessings for the upcoming year...I'm still smiling from this story...loved it!
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
12/17/2006 |
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| lol. he found himself. Too bad it took so much to go that far. But it takes a lot for all of us to realize that we are running and that we are just running from our true selves. The rat race has passed me by and I'm glad of it, too. Excellent again. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Riley :) |
12/10/2006 |
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| wow. that was pretty far out. but very good!! loved it. have to agree with CS. Very amazing. pretty funny though too. |
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| Reviewed by Linda Ames |
5/10/2006 |
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Regis,
this is great! i loved your characters' names and all that they stood for. well done!
linda |
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| Reviewed by Jill Carpenter |
12/15/2005 |
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Regis,
This one was great fun to read, start to finish. I found myself laughing out loud a time or two. Very nicely done, entertaining, thought-provoking, and very appreciated by this reader. All of the nice reviews you have gotten for this one are well deserved!!
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
11/4/2005 |
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I'm so free and happy, Regis, I must be dead - lol. Great funny write! Very entertaining! Lol.
God bless, Regis!
Sandie. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Ault |
7/16/2005 |
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What a wonderfully morbid tale! Loved it...I work many folks who don't realize they are dead...
Mike Ault |
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| Reviewed by M. B. |
7/11/2005 |
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Wow, Regis, DEAD MAN is one helluva read! Excellent twists!! Kept me riveted from beginning to end...
~Mari |
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| Reviewed by The Smoking Poet |
7/10/2005 |
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Delicious, Regis. Liberating indeed, to be free of all the stresses and fears, all the anxieties and inhibitions and hangups and worries and obligations and empty duties of life. The trick... to do this while living...
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
5/23/2005 |
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This short story is uncanny hilarious, Regis!!!! Yet in a way sad and freeing. I loved every word of reading it!!
Peace. |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very |
3/21/2005 |
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Regis This is a Fanastic story. Would make a Great movie! and series on tv too.
you really shed some happy different light onto being dead. Being alive being dead. Wonderful and happy. So free! Just really love this story Thanks Reg is talented in every way! stories poems and photography. I think I won't dread that day if this is the fun I can have. Thanks my friend (C:)
Love Tracey xo |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Richards |
3/21/2005 |
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i like it, can i have a part.
debbie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel) |
3/21/2005 |
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Regis:
I'm so thrilled to read your stories!!!!! They're so wonderfully-told and the plot are so well-organized. I really like the ideas of your stories. BRILLIANT work indeed!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/5/2005 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Danielle Mundy |
11/27/2004 |
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| Absolutely wonderful, Regis!! I was hooked from the first line!! |
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| Reviewed by Sage Writer |
11/26/2004 |
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| This is intriguing. It made me want to read more. It's seasoned with great details, a tad bit humorous, but has a great deal of sci-fi and suspense to hold a reader's attention. I said all that to say, I truly like this story. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Gibson |
9/2/2004 |
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Regis,
Decided to read a few short stories today instead of poetry. Glad I did. This story drew me right in. You really have a great idea rolling on this one. Man, the way you grasped the way most people live and their need to be free was phenomenal! For a first draft I am impressed! This story could really go places. The writing is good Regis, but the thought process going on behind the story is what masters come up with. Not just being nice my friend, I can see it here!
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
5/28/2004 |
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| i like this story alot! it was engaging all the way thorugh, watching to see what he would do next, appreciating the concept of being dead and living life free...wnat a novel idea! lol from conception to execution, a tight write! |
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| Reviewed by Joni Latham |
4/5/2004 |
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| I was compelled to continue reading until the very end. Was he physically dead or if he had just decided that the all the things that we fret about in life are just not worth effort? Very good premise. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sparks |
2/8/2004 |
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| My favorite part of this is the first line. It was impossible not to read on after reading that. Great job. |
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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
1/16/2004 |
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| good tale |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Knauer |
12/30/2003 |
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| I like this Regis. As a person who has contempleted death several times, met it a few times head-on, and known the ease with which it comes, this story stirred many familiar feelings in me. I also read it as a man liberating himself from binding chains. Very nice, and thought provoking. |
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| Reviewed by Claywoman |
12/11/2003 |
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| I love this story! You are a master of words guy! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/11/2003 |
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A pure delight to read Regis!!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts....keep on writing!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
12/11/2003 |
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This is a very entertaining story. Loved the ending. Your characterization is good, just like the girl in the bus. Remember I told you I could see her just by the dialogue? Same here. Good job, Regis. By the way: the girl in the bus... did those two ever get together? I want to know.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry |
12/10/2003 |
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| Regis, this was an absolutely delightfully entertaining read, funny, and exceptionally well written. ~~Bonnie Q |
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| Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love |
12/10/2003 |
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| Where do you come up with stuff? Great, as always. I always look forward to reading your work. |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
12/10/2003 |
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This is good, Regis. It sent my mind wandering a million different ways. (Ummm... that's good, right? lol) This is creative and the reader is able to apply it as applicable to his/her life - in many ways!
Thanks,
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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard |
12/10/2003 |
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Okay, I was with you until the end. It was great fun following him around in death, but was he not really? Because he could smash things? Maybe he only wanted to be? Very enjoyable, thanks! Reminded me of how I often think I'll read the paper in the morning and find my own obituary there!
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/10/2003 |
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| Really enjoyed this, Regis! Great story. Made me think about so many things we do in life and hate, yet we do them anyway; and so many other things we wish we could do, but don't. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
12/10/2003 |
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| Now this is an interesting and fun concept! Thanks for a great read! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/10/2003 |
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(((regis)))
o, my--terrific read, i agree, this would make a wonderful one act play
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
12/10/2003 |
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This would make one of the funniest one act plays one could imagine.
Great material Regis.
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/10/2003 |
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| Good story, Regis; thanks for sharing! Enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D Love you, Regis; peace and happiness to you always! |
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