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Description: Be Specific!
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Clarion Call to All Writers: Be Specific!

    Be specific!
    That’s the clarion call to all creative writers as you pull your readers into your fictive dream. That’s the reason description is an art form.
         
    Description is simply a portrayal, in words, of something that can be perceived by the senses. Each time you use a word or phrase to describe a person, a setting or any other aspect of writing, it must be clear, concise and straight to the point of the situation.
   
As a writer, you are painting a word picture so the reader "sees" exactly what you are describing. It
vividly portrays a person, place, or thing in such a way that the reader can visualize the topic and enter into the writer’s experience or the fictive dream.
    Descriptive Goals as you Write
:
       
***Writer’s create descriptions by using images with elaborate use of sensory language: Sight, sound, taste, feel, etc.  It must be vivid.
      
***Writer’s use figurative language such as simile, hyperbole, metaphor, symbolism and personification.
       
***Writer’s use “Show, Don’t Tell” through the use of active Verbs and creative adjectives. When a writer really wants to go in depth in a scene he will use “show” and the mental movie rolls in the reader’s mind. When the writer wants to get a quick point or speed up a scene he will use “tell” in the scene.
     
Thoughts on Descriptive Writing:
      •        Make writing more concrete or vivid
      •        Add specific information
      
•        Show sensory images
      
•        Make comparisons
      
•        Use dialogue
      
•        Make writing more interesting
      
•        Make characters come alive           
      
 Descriptive Writing Exercises:
    
       
Note: Keep a Descriptive Journal where you keep all your writing exercises. This will be a fantastic future reference to see  your improvement as a writer.
      
1.     Observe and then describe an event.
      
2.     Walk outside your apartment or house and describe it in two ways:
               
a.      Tell: Write a bare-bone version of the walk with few descriptions.
              
b.     Show:  Write a full-blown description of your walk with many descriptions: Use adjectives, descriptive phrases, metaphors, similes, etc.
             
c.     Read each version out loud: You will see which version put the reader into the scene.
      
3.     Reflect on a person or object that stands out in your memory. Write a description of the person/object.
      
4.     Take a photograph, for example, and then describe the person, setting with the bare-bone approach and then the full-blown approach.Email me with an example you created from one of these writing exercise: jtbookevents.yahoo.com Happy Writing!


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