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Peace Universe/Paz Universal
by Maria Cristina Azcona
Friday, April 29, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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PAZ UNIVERSAL por Maria Cristina Azcona Hay un lugar no lejos de aquí donde las abejas rodean el juego infantil y les dan dulce miel que los hace vivir Hay un estanque donde la luna se embelesa con sus dos caras opuestas y obesas una negra y otra blanca, la raza no pesa. Este es un grupo con ingenio, la poesía siempre tiene un premio, hay un único y solo gremio Hay una sola voz con la que converso con este gran y global universo y es porque siempre lo digo en verso. Tengamos siempre consideraciones y no caigamos en las tentaciones de molestar la alegría del otro con las pasiones. Y alcanzaremos una nueva calidad en la educacion de la moralidad con respeto a las diferencias, y habrá igualdad. PEACE UNIVERSE by María Cristina Azcona
There is a place not so far away Where bees surround the children’s play And give sweet honey to them each day There is a pond where the moon gazes To her two opposite rounded faces Dark and light one, distant from races (In this magnificent dream There’s only one team And poetry always wins).
There is a unique voice to converse Around this global universe And it’s just to say it in verse Let us be kinder to each other And not be tempted to bother The joyfulness of our brother. And let us arrive to a new quality Through education in morality Where differences are in equality
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
7/23/2006 |
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"Let us be kinder to each other
And not be tempted to bother
The joyfulness of our brother.
And let us arrive to a new quality
Through education in morality
Where differences are in equality"
Superb write Maria!! "Peace Universe" is what it's all about!
Love & Friendship Suzie :-D
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| Reviewed by Meva Onyurt |
6/11/2005 |
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Wonderful thoughts of peace embedded in two different languages! I am awed at your dexterity at bringing your cause with strong visual metaphors. I felt this poem...
May peace be upon all!
Meva Ayşe Akgiray |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
5/18/2005 |
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| indeed it is so...i've missed your writing, and it is a great pleasure to read these words, today. life takes us so many places, it is comforting to be reminded of what is real, and eternal. namaste'! |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
5/2/2005 |
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Maria,
What we all need - universal peace ... thanks for this quintessential write on poetry; a most significant dream!!
Blessings,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by * Aberjhani |
4/30/2005 |
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An exceptionally inspiring hymn to humanity's potential for grace and harmony in a world so heavily overshadowed by the traumas of violence and ignorance. These line rise and arc like a rainbow of golden faith and charity reaching from the soul of the poet to that of world, bestowing a priceless gift of angelic love everywhere it shines. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and important poetic message.
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by David Livingstone (Reader) |
4/30/2005 |
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Inspiring poetic message to be followed and shared throughout the
four corners of the Earth.
Muy importante mensaje para todos los seres del planet tierra.
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
4/30/2005 |
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Poet Maria Cristina Azcona, your formulated, poetic words show beauty of spirit and soul, combined with intelligence and compassion, for, it will be the Voices of Poets, the Voices of People, who inspire and instill the true meaning and wisdom of a world at peace into the hearts of its brethern.
In a confused world of self-satisfaction as the means to happiness, you show and promote the wealth of harmonic elevation, and are a Shining Star to be followed, by your example, with love and respect.
From my heart to yours, I wish to extend my gratitude and admiration, and thank you for your shared gift of visional unification.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by Margarita Caligaris (Reader) |
4/30/2005 |
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Seis estrofas de sabiduria, art y coraje. Un poema de belleza,
paz y armonia.
Six stanzas of wisdom, art and courage. A poem filled with beauty,
peace and harmony.
Me encato', principalmente la sexta estrofa.
The closing stanza did close this poem, "Peace Universe/Paz Universal" with a wise touching.
Margarita Caligaris, Litt. D., Ph.D. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/29/2005 |
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True poetic expression of the values of humanity... A sweet voice of peace and brotherhood. "Peace Universe/Paz Universal" is a masterpiece.
"Peace Universe/Paz Universal" es una expresion poetica de valor y
sublimacion a los valores de la humanidad.
Gracias, admirada Poeta!
Thank You, esteemed Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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