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Uncovered
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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stalking 
chukar partridge,
cottontop quail out
of bounds, poaching,

in a mid-winter
nosy survey where
he shouldn't
have been,

Durango
hiker buried on
the San Juan ridge,
his backpack filled with
leather hardened jerky and
junk mail,

avalanche
dog smelled
less of his jerky,
more of his rank soul,

the more
he dug, the
more he uncovered,

the ravens
were eager to
pick his bones clean,
the wolves had already
been there, canis lupus
incisors are what slay the
reprobate,

avalanche
revealed the
cause of death,
the wolf lie beside
the human carcass
with particles of karma
attached, fate intervened,
retribution feeds off disease,
the wolf died of rabies, the man 
of greed. 


Copyright 11/11/2009 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Uncovered"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
powerful karmic logic to a most unique poem ,uncovering a plausible scenario in an urban terrain ... nature feeds off itself even when its full ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
Full fathom five..on land ...and a nod to Robbie Burns, National Geographic and Animal Planet; you have the craft and insight to put us all to shame for our misdemeanours...and I do feel sorry for the wolf.
You shine, Lady Sweetwater!

John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 12, 2009
...and all is right with the world, yes?

-gene.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 12, 2009
An eye for an eye in nature oft times makes man cringe. Greed makes me cringe.
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed on November 12, 2009
I love that line, pieces of Karma attached. Powerfully penned Sage.

Reviewed on November 12, 2009
Good one, Sage; well done, my dear!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Sage, Fate always seems to intervene, especially when you are not expecting it. Love it!
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed on November 11, 2009
I always say, what comes around GOES around. =] Excellent write, vividly imaged, Sage: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
excellent write-karma is indeed its own reward/punishment

Reviewed on November 11, 2009
this is so profound Sage
I love how "fate intervened"
...and I must say in the errie essence of "Uncovered"
there is always a price to pay...even those "rank souls" get a piece of their own....chilling...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
And they both were borne to hell's eternal fire and damnation, can I have an AMEN! Gotta watch those unauthorized damn surveys, sometimes the damnedest things happen when you least expect it. Should've quick his piano playing gig at the whorehouse . . .


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