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Smoke On The Water
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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An experiment of three poems in one: one read across, two down. The really cool thing would be if all three poems had slightly different senses and meanings, but alas mine are pretty much the same! :)) xx

PS Sorry about the tiddly print but seemed necessary to get the format to fit the available page.

PPS It weren't me that put the ruddy wiggles in it... on the edit page it's perfectly straight! :)) xx

 

SMOKE ON THE WATER

 

so what if                                                      there is smoke on the water

a fuming wrath                                             that drifts un-netted

burns up life                                                 before our very eyes

our well-spring stopped                             so we shall never drink again

 

we send our silver men                              to waterless planets

to drill for knowledge                                   we look to the future

yet liquid rock                                                in gutted repulsion

spews back                                                   at what we have done

 

our earth sign revolts                                   Taurus has blazing nostrils

and tilts his horn to plentiful revenge        El Toro brings down

his steaming iron hoof                               his black-scorching punishment

all-consuming                                               with ire's flame

 
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 Reviews of "Smoke On The Water"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 29, 2010
works well reading from bottom up also ...

three poetic gods in one ... a trinity of idea born from the ether of silver men ...
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on August 26, 2010
Way Cool! :~) I think that my favorite among the three, however, is the down poem on the right.

Cryssa
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
A very successful experiment, Kate
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 24, 2010
How very clever Kate, I love it.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 24, 2010
Apologies unnecessary. You're in a class all your own...
and I'd like to enroll. -gene.
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
oh my........well done
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
THE EARTH'S DEMISE IS ENTIRELY OUR FAULT. WE HAVE IGNORED WARNING SIGNS LONG ENOUGH AND NOW NOTHING CAN BE DONE ABOUT IT, FOR IT IS TOO LITTLE, TOO LATE TO STOP THE 'END' FROM COMING...OR, IS IT? DO I HEAR A HERALD SAYING...'EVERY KNEE.....?' EXCELLENT KATE, ENJOYED AND APPRECIATED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
Can you believe? Rigor Mortis Deep Purple. Burial at sea somewhere where the treasure chest is weighted down in tarnished wrath and the gold coins will never spend the soul's revival...buried...buried, buried as the cedar rots in evangelical putrid attitude and nasty rebuttal.

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
Intelligent and cleverly constructed thoughts!
I believe that, in my realm of awareness,
this is a first.
Enjoyed ...
richard
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
Kate, Smoke swirls one direction than another, telling a story...this is magnificent, you reach and reach...grasping and creating~great work!!!
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
Very creative, Kate. Nicely done.
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
Kate, the whole of this rendering speaks with the authority of the heart. Your heart my friend. Its voice is loud, crystal clear in image and resolute in message. Your vehicle of choice though novel, provides only the ride. Not the propulsion. For it is your humanitarian concern and compassion that light the rocket fuel, poetic verse, serving as motive force. To you and with you, let the best be. Jon Michael
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
Kate,
For me it doesn't matter which way I read, down or across or both, it all makes sense...not logic but heart and gut sense because the images are of a mind.. and you, well you are something else.
Marvellous!

John
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
Vivid imagery. Kate...your form feeds the mind. I also love the title. Taurus is my moon sign, and I never associated it with such dark force and power. Makes me wonder and smile.

thanks,
Gina
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
You are so creative and free to go invent such a mass of writing. I think you are literally free, and I love this one because it can be read many ways--I love this kind of creativity! Great writing, Kate--poetry ... excellent. Thank you.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
What a unique and captivating view of expressing your feelings poetically...another jewel to join your many others Kate, I love being kept on my toes and you are the sweet lady to do it.

Carole~
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
Kate, this is such an amazing accomplishment..I had to read the two separate ones twice and then i read it as a whole, and omg, you have created such a masterfilled poem with amazing grace and with an epic theme. I applaud your brilliance and think to myself can I do this?

I am going to try to do one of these, it will be quite interesting to say the least...I will go one step further as you stated and make the two separate themes and see if the one as a whole works as a third separate theme. Okay I have too much time on my hands..lol

Thank you, my sweet Kate for being such a beautiful soul and spirit sister..especially today!

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
I appreciate the unique structure of your poem and of course the theme that is put forward via your verses. Thank you, Kate. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
What a poetic venture!
What a challenge you have pushed past, fabulous sleek poems, each allowing the other's presence to spring up, none violating the other...all passionate and sharp words.
This is a prize, how on earth is it done?!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
What a fantastic idea and executed with the ease that only you possess. Patrick
Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
Those wiggles together with the juxtaposition of images add to the points and counterpoints made in the "a-cross- stitched" poem. The two "down" poems are rich and absolutely top-notch! I like the way all the three amalgamate into one-whole, yet they remain distinct streams of thoughts!
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
I have trouble walking and chewing gum...you have done quite well with this write...or writings.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
That AD editor page stinks, but I got your message herein, keep writtin' & I'll keep readin'...e
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
It's tough enough for me to write one poem much less what you have accomplished. Unique and brilliant.
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