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Reality Check
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Too many lives are smothered by expectations. As if that was not bad enough we have the thought police telling us to lay off booze, eat heathy food get more exercise and be careful not to have too much fun.

That perfect man you longed to meet
And make part of your life
Turned out to be a control freak,
The dream lasted a whole week
And awakening was so bleak.
Hope and expectation ends in grief.

The perfect job you so desired
To advance your stalled career
Led you into a dead - end.
Ambition is a false friend,
Frustration seems a strong trend
Dipping towards a dark nadir.

Time for a reality check,
Your life is a carousel.
What goes around keeps coming back,
The car you rode is off the track,
Failure stretched you on a rack
And disillusion cracks your shell.

So step down off your merry-go-round
Into these waiting arms,
I cannot offer you perfection
But promise a connection
That will salve hurt and rejection
With a thousand loving balms.

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Reality Check"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 18, 2003
There is much wisdom and wit in this piece. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you. Regis

Reviewed on November 15, 2003
dubious about the happy ending bit with all your charms, absolute dead pan platitudes, ambition is a false friend, o noble fall, such lofty stance,
anyway well checked out, never wear them

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
EXACTLY WHAT ALL HUMANITY NEEDS,i.e. Reality Check & You Bet It Is Happening & Still Coming!

TRASK

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
life is certainly not perfect but your verve comes close to it...


well done!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
Careful, Ian.. Unless she knows who she is, you may find yourself knee-deep in sweeties! The poetry is perfect.. the sentiments, seductive.. This is a great piece! katy xox.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
Hi Ian,

What a romantic offer. You are so sweet I hope she reads this.

As for me...I am hopelessly mired in expectations. They are without a doubt the death toll of every relationship.

~ Sara

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
Most loving touching piece Ian!!

Love & Hugs Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
Oh Ian!!! This is wonderful!!!
love the message and style.......its so loving!!!!
whoever you wrote it for is blessed!
pax
A


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