Great title - wish I had thought of it. The metre and rhyme needs a little work and I feel you can do better with this. I quit smoking two years ago and I reckon I would have appreciated this sentiment at the time. You really have got something with this poem. I think you should keep the earthy 'plain speaking' but, and this is just my opinion of course, your poem needs to flow a little easier. I don't know if it was intentional that the poem is 14 lines. It could be a sonnet?
Jodi and Nick’s chance for romance was never realized while they were in high school. Now, five years later, they meet again. Will a class reunion be their first—and last—chance at love?
Reunion of Souls is a sweet, contemporary romance abo
He needs a wife. She needs a reason to trust him. He fell for her at first sight. She, not so much.
If you’re into engaging romantic stories with heart and humor, together with complex family dynamics, you’ll love His Practically Perfect Pla
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.