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Wednesday, November 2, 2022

Inside my minds eye
I envoke thee
Mind won't shut up
it's not for thee

Shut your thought
brainhole

In my minds eye
I dream
In my minds eye
silent scream

Shut your thought
brainhole

Moving forward
steady
you are

Stop your forward motion
I have a yearning notion
burning for you
I am

Inside my minds eye
I envoke thee
Mind won't shut up
it's not for thee

Shut your thought
brainhole

You will be mine
all mine
until the end of time

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Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 2, 2022

The struggle between conscious and sub conscious, between heart and mind and between soul and desire are often to say the least...a struggle. Seems you captured some of that in this write...

Fee

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 2, 2022

It's probably still better than the other hole at the other end. ;-)

Humor aside, I have those kinds of dreams that won't shut up sometimes at night. The way I deal with them is to sometimes write a short story from their freakish direction. They sure have a way of driving one crazy when they get going and won't stop like you describe.

Ron

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