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Fire

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Monday, November 28, 2022


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Body burning
mind is yearning 
hear me out 
make me shout
all this that I'm feeling,
send every atom reeling
from pure intensity
 I'm loosing gravity
for you
now take what's due.

Mind over matter
or so they say
I don't care anyway
if you are the matter
my mind's loosing battle
over and over again
sweet aching pain.

Ashes and ember
all I remember
all that I am
all that I can
I pour into this
lingering kiss.

Now take me.
 

 



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Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on December 1, 2022
i loved the flow and tempo of your piece. i actually find it adorable especially these lines: if you are the matter, my mind's loosing battle
well crafted!

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 30, 2022
Compelling rhythms with an intense overflow of feeling, beautifully composed, concise and to the point. So well done.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 29, 2022
Hot, hot, hot! Careful, whoever takes that kiss might get burned! Could be a song reminiscent of the Doors, Light my Fire, in its intensity. Cool.

Ron

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on November 29, 2022
wow so deep and riveting dear Elisabeth. Thank you for sharing your flaring pen of beauty and love. Continue creating words from your soul.


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