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Elisabeth Barstowe

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Just say when

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Saturday, March 25, 2023


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Felt this fire before,
this need for more.
Growing higher,
 sweet desire.

Raging, aching need,
the flames that we feed.
Every touch of skin 
feeding the flame within.

You are the one that I need to feel, 
your love is the drug I need to seal 
the bond between body, heart and mind,
it's for real and so hard to find.

Never want to loose this love so sweet,
my lifes dessert, you sweep me off my feet,
Such a gentle heart and soul in you, 
with the dirty mind to see it through.

The best combination there is,
to build a fire such as this. 
I'm no cinderella 
more of a SINderella.

And you my sweetheart is the Prince of sin 
come here and I'll make you my king.
over and over again,
just say when.



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 25, 2023
Great rhythms and rhymes in this one, in addition to an important message well developed.


New Poetry by Elisabeth Barstowe
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