Carrots (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 25, 2010

Certainly not what I expected when I read the title.
Interesting and SO sad. By any chance, are you ever called a pessimist?
Connie

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 20, 2010

Dark and deep. The life of a human can be torture for we can't see the point of it all. But maybe if we did, we wouldn't learn what we need to learn? Powerful, Patrick...

Lin

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 18, 2010

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 17, 2010

Quite profound, my friend.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 17, 2010

The stick of the donkey are the envy of the stallion! (LOL)

Georg

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

The cruel hand of fate or whatever it is called just keeps that darned carrot in front of us and you just can't resist trying to grab. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

Intriguing write, Patrick; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

The stick, ah yes the stick, on the ass, or is it a donkey, but still a little persuation can go a long way. Ithacoras, did he ride an ass, he went for the light too, didn't he. I'm so confused.
Good one Patrick!~ Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

Very well done, Patrick. You've said a mouthful here.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

I like this a lot. Change of pace. Nice one Patrick.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

A quote from page 529 of "Becoming':
Opening his eyes, taking a deep breath.
Since he was fifteen God had dangled that carrot in front of him and always pulled it away�
But No! Nothing was going to happen to stop it now�
Nothing!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

Hey, that madness is only in your existence, not the rest of us, or that donkey'...e

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

wow!patrick...this was a thrice read...provocative...oh nooo...my brain had to work....not always used to that...really like this patmedlin

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on February 16, 2010

Clever write, Patrick....and we'll all chase that carrot until that final blow. Only a small portion of that sand in the hourglass belongs to us...enjoyed. Thanks!

Anna