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One for Karla
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Cheer up it can only get worse.

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Life just gave you lemons

And you made lemonade

But the lemons were all moldy

The flavor off a shade

 

No one would ever drink it

No one, not even you

Because drinking moldy lemonade

Is not the wisest thing to do

 

Remember lemons have a season

You have second chance

Make yourself a fresh batch of lemonade

And experience all of life’s romance

 

You only have this life but once

It would be a pity if you fail

For you alone are in control

Not fate as some would wail

 

Take a long look in the mirror

Be pleased with what is there

Welcome to the human race

With our miseries to share

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "One for Karla"
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
When I'm down in the dumps, I'll think of lemonade and fresh starts. God gives second chances, too, something I've often been thankful for.
Connie

Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Thank you, Patrick, needed this one. Appreciate it. It's just when things get me down they REALLY get me down. Tired, ya know? Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
You have a kind of Groucho (Grouchy?!) Marx humour in this one, Patrick, which is bittersweet but which is undeniably clownish as if to bring a smile to a world-weary face. Thank you for this intention - and it has certainly worked for me, not least because your talk of lemons is so visceral that my mouth is actually getting that tart-taste and watering! I do hope Karla appreciates when she has her head back out from underneath the duvet, bless her. I'm sure she will. xx

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Refreshing write, Patrick! I guess we all need a fresh batch of lemons now and then. Nicely penned.

Anna

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Now if Karla should had a generous portion of Smirnoff in it...I will be stirring that pitch into a storm myself!!!

Georg


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Make yourself a fresh batch of lemonade

Something all of us have to do, from time to time.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 21, 2010
Excellent & I am sure that Karla loves it too...Ed

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 21, 2010
Well done, Patrick.

Reviewed on February 21, 2010
Sour lemons for poor Karla, of course you grow them, you would know, and I have a suspicion you're peddling your product, are you? ha,
Nice one Patrick! Jasmin Horst


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