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See the Light
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Things would be better

Photo:By Patrick Granfors after last Friday's Storm


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Sometimes when the storm has passed

Silver linings offset the blue

Aside the cloud’s dark gray is cast

God’s clear prism displays no hue

 

A colorless rainbow lights the sky

Providing guidance to the soul

The perfect model we all should try

To keep colorblindness our goal

 

Each and every one of us is different

Each and every one of us the same

To let colors come between us

Puts each and every one of us to shame

 

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "See the Light"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Amen, Patrick! We are all the same....lovely write!

Anna

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Nicely done Patrick. Great poetry.

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
I couldn't agree more! Great poem Patrick!

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Ain't that the truth!

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Beautiful visions of the eye, heart, and mind, Patrick.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Clearly a poem of deep vision. Joining the colors of the rainbow in their home has enlightened me.

Ron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Sadly what Ed says is true, myself included. Working through one's own hypocrisy is a lifetime's chore. Patrick

Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
A colorless rainbow. What a wonderful vision you've brought with your words.

Donna

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Colorless rainbows? Maybe that's what I've been missing out on. Every one of us is different, every one of us the same? All these contradictions and yet the message comes through loud and clear. Well said, sir. Thanks, Dick

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Miserable wet after the storm comes the regret of never have thought of bringing an umbrella with you...

Georg




Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Each and every one of us is different
Each and every one of us the same
To let colors come between us
Puts each and every one of us to shame

I appreciate and agree with the opinion that you have shared via your verses here, Patrick. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Wonderful poem Patrick ~ wise words
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
hmmmm...thinking about ed's honest words.....wonder what inspired this...wonderin about a 'colorless' rainbow...only because i just wrote about its different hues...but not with the same conotations...enjoyed the jolt into thinking a little deeper...pat

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Great lesson in this write, Patrick. Very well done, my friend.
God bless.

Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Wonderful work, Patrick, and that piccy looks like a StormSpinner (Karla) type of photo! Very nice; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
So true, but even those of us who profess to be color blind and not prejudice, are still so at times in our lives...ed

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Perfect. An understanding that it takes hard work to arrive at a place of value on the spiritual color scale and arrive at the top rung, and stay on the top rung in good graces. Thought-provoking and earnest in delivery, the message is clear, Patrick. Your work has come full circle, something to be proud of.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed on June 26, 2010
A great tune Patrich, can we include the loon?
Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Amen to this. So very well written. Warmth and Love to you, Patrick.


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