The Odds of a One Night Stand (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

The Odds of a One Night Stand
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Is this a form of deception? Took a couple of liberties here. Those in the know will know.

The Odds of a One Night Stand My eyes are affixed to hers They meet for a fleeting moment Soft, shining, doe like eyes It’s my imagination She doesn’t even know I’m here In her world I don’t exist Still there’s that gentle sigh in her voice Captivating, almost intoxicating The way she rolls her tongue Across her delicate perfectly formed lips Exquisitely flowing, bouncing hair I can almost catch her fragrance across the room Big girl, not some skin and bones health food fanatic Gorgeous figure – for her age Impossible to believe she has borne six babies That’s just me I guess Prone to the admiration of the female posterior The way she flaunts hers – criminal And she knows it too She’s had her share of run-ins with Judges In the Superior Court Of popular opinion Sigh! She’s leaving now Blue ribbon girl Best in show A Newfie Westminster Kennel Club 2004 Animal Planet Rerun Last Night Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on November 29, 2010

You had me going until the end. Super cute!!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on November 19, 2010

Westminster Kennel Club gives prizes for things such as this! Bones. I've got just the leash for you, Patrick! Heel and Roll-Over minutes! Firm teats for borning six babies!

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 18, 2010

... you got me!!! But, being a country wench, my mind was running on Prize Ayrshires at the Cattle Market instead!!! :)) Lovin it! xx

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

And being a Newfoundlander myself.....giggle....cute write, Patrick! Gotta love those Newfie dogs....they're truly awesome!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Wow - and some guys watch Playboy Channel Reruns.

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on November 17, 2010

Extreme irony, but the punch is held well until it has the most impact...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Prone to the admiration of the female posterior

Well, if it must be known, I am prone the same way. This is a clever write and to me, it expresses a lot. Thank you, Patrick. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Really, this is great writing Patrick! Great! Curve-ball prose, very creative, very well composed; yes I'm a dog owner too. Your talent is really having fun here. And so is this reader.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Very good. How a few well chosen words can turn a beautiful woman into, literally, a dog.
Good, show there Judge Patrick
Your friend, Mark

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

She's a dog! A ha! She's a soulful eyed puppy dog. You're a dog lover, you snuck that one in there!
Christine

Reviewed by Andy Turner

A lady of the night.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Imitation is the best flattery. For a minute there, I thought you were writing about Jeanie, my tiny dancer.

Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson

kept me guessing...

cheers,
dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Kinda sounds to me like she may be a real "dog"...woof, e