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Dancing With the Stars
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Just Whimsy


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You can grab the moon and tango

When you’re dancing with stars

With castanets do the fandango

When you’re dancing with the stars

 

Ride a comet’s sparkling tail

When you’re dancing with the stars

With the Crab Nebula as your veil

When you’re dancing with the stars

 

Kiss Jupiter on his cheek

When you’re dancing with the stars

Part Venus’s clouds and peek

When you’re dancing with the stars

 

Wear your heart upon your sleeve

When you’re dancing with the stars

Accomplish anything that you believe

When you’re dancing with the stars

 

As the dawn begins to break

While you’re dancing with the stars

From your dream you will awake

Your heart dancing with the stars

 

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "Dancing With the Stars"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 21, 2010
The stars, and planets, are an endless source of poetic expression.

Fantastical.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
There's a new planet to dance on! Bristol is her name! Is it live or is it Memorex?

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Hey cool write...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Light and whimsical....way better than that tv show! Just can't watch that stuff! I love dancing and love to dance, but the parade/charade on tv is toooooo much! Oh my, I've been on a rant haven't I? giggle Enjoyed your poem, Patrick!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Much better than that TV show of the same name.

PS: Have you met any more Dream Girls on Animal Planet lately??!!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Imaginative and nicely done, Patrick.

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Very well composed, Patrick

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
Enjoyed this Pat, though I rarely dance with stars, I do however dance regularly with cars on NJ's roads...e

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
I do all my dancing with my sweetie and rather than parting Venus's clouds, we've been dancing on them. Not sure that's a dream that I want to awaken from, but I love your sentiments.... Nicely done. Thanks Patrick. Dick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
Oh what fun Patrick! You're the king. So what does dear Venus have behind the clouds, hmmm?
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
lovely dreamy bit of whimsy!

Reviewed on November 18, 2010
Did you say, grab a comet by the tail? Oh, ok, ride, I see, that's much more polite. This very airy sort of whimsical stuff, you must be on a high? Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
What would Len Gooedman say???

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
just marry me already, damn! you knew i'd love this.


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