Parallax Valentine (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 12, 2012

And that's why there are two....with another my vision is more complete.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on February 8, 2012

AH! I knew there was a romantic under all that blarney. Love this, love you, e

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 8, 2012

The joy of another day to come,
With the light of a color called love

Too bad that color can't be packaged up, and sold around the world.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

Pink and Blue combined can make a
beautiful Royal Couple!! *Patrick*
Thank You for sharing your kingdom!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

I LOVE THE PICTURE, PATRICK! AND HOW BLESSED YOU BOTH ARE...WHEN YOUR LOVE COMPLIMENTS NATURE, IT DOESN'T GET ANY BETTER THAN THAT. MUCH LOVE AND FAITH AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

Beautifully done, Patrick!!!

Anna

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

Just like a master mixes his oils on the palette, I love the way you make a beautiful oneness of your very different strokes and unique perceptions, Patrick. Your vibrant love is a work of art for certain sure! May you both so continue to be blessed. xx

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

very very nice! Morgan

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

Color my Sweetie and I both impressed. You set the bar very high, my friend.

Well done. Dick

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

good romantic poem ...

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

Nicely done, Patrick.

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

PAT ...

GOOD POEM & GOOD WORD - HAD TO LOOK IT UP ... TK

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2012

May the colour you call love never be shaded by the hues of absence. Nicely penned, Patrick.

Peace always,
Roger

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 6, 2012

This is so very romantic, Eileen is a very lucky woman.
Lovely poetry, Patrick!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on February 6, 2012

Patrick you write so beautifully to your lovely Lady Eileen.
Your photo is a striking color scape in nature's canvas.
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 6, 2012

The comedian turns romantic...hard to believe this is u...;-) ed

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 6, 2012

Don't know who's the pea or who's the pod. But one thing is certain and that is that you two get along famously and that is all that matters. Wonderful poem for your wife, Patrick.

Ron

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on February 6, 2012

Yeah, sure! You think Eileen'll buy this over a Valentine gift or a really expensive dinner?
Mark

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on February 6, 2012

Interestingly worked out from beginning to the end, Patrick. Enjoyable, and heartwarming Valentine read.