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Pride
by Carol J Grace → (All Poetry by Carol J Grace)
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Although I wrote this poem in first person it is not autobiographical. I simply felt the poem had more power written in first person voice.


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Thorny words that pricked my pride,

left me bleeding resentment

and wanting to blame,


I slung fiery arrows

left nothing inside.

Hurling accusations,


I did not even take aim

just pulled the trigger

and let my words scatter.


The avalanche that resulted

killed and maimed

not just those who had hurt me


but the innocent were shattered.


How could I be so thoughtless,

so what if I was insulted?

We need to learn once and for all,


we need to finally answer the call

to stop being heartless

to put others first


then Kingdom living will finally take hold,

and Kingdom understanding

will rule over all.


 

 


 

 


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 Reviews of "Pride"
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
A word-bomb. Love it. Well done, Carol.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Excellent and powerful written piece.I enjoy reading it,take care

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 28, 2009
Powerful, powerful writing, Carol, that contains so much truth.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on October 27, 2009
Well penned. I wish everyone could read this and follow its directive. Exceptional. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Ahh; free will. It's a burden. Good write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
In my humble estimation, there is a great deal of wisdom in what you express via your verses here, Carol. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis


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