Just A Metaphor (poem) by Cathrine Hottran on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Heidi K (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

he he,genialt,p� tide med en norsk komentar hr ogs� synes jeg =)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

One way to talk about the nicotine effects of fags. Glad I've never smoked..

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

This was an excellent write..

And though we be ash, we shall resurrect and become the light once more.

I enjoyed this work.

Allen

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

indeed...

I totally agree with the first of your reviews to which I can add no more-

excellent write, excellent sight!!

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Superb metaphor C.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

I like the way you mixed this one up !
Ashes to ashes dust to dust, and so it goes;-)
Very wise and intriguing work!

Love,
Alrisha

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

I see this as more than what it actually meant. Life is just like that. When you are looking at the present, it seems that all is lost. But a closer look will bring a hope so sure, and so deep. I agree with you that every end has an opposite of it. It makes sense.
Good write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Most effective with economy of words. Nicely done. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Creative and to the point.
Well done.

Peace

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Well done and intriguing!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

A well described end for those who continue to smoke.

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

C,

Interesting revelation about you hidden in there. Great, short dance.

B

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Most interesting!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Provocative metaphor, a gift for thinkers. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Truly interesting metaphors!

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

It's all ash in the end. Very thoughtful poem.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

I actually read the metaphors into more than a cigarette in this one. Very cleverly done!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

A cigarette glows and becomes ash activating the persin using! But there exists no personal pleasure or achivement! unlike a cigarette you a light the lives around you and enjoy with what you do to others gaining se;f satisfaction and happiness. The begining is vital and not the end when every living thing perish! you are a precious jewel dear Hottran!