A hard-hitting poem on a very sensitive topic, C. As a military brat, and one who has also served in the US military, I have given this country my life, to do with as it sees fit. As a father and American citizen now, in early middle age, there are things that I see that I don't agree with and rail against in my own work (See Dogs of War, of Prayer for the Soldiers on my Authorsden page), and this piece brings out mixed feelings in me. Suffice it to say, now, that I agree with both Rage, and Karla. There are currents at work here that go past just the US of A, and that include elements that are international, and European, in scope. A thoughtful work, poet.
Incestuous, occult dark powers operating under the cover of religion and banking, the hybrid spawn of nephilim and anakim, rule this world from concealment behind polished fronts intended to make the general public see integrity and culture. They have no nationality themselves (similar to the multinationals and banking structures they own), but need others to believe in this misleading concept in order to continue to rule. I just pity their victims and their supporters who will be among their future victims. Their aim may be darker than man is capable of perceiving or imagining, but it pales to their own fate under universal law. Thank you for creating and having the courage to share. Take care,
RAge
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2005
IT SADDENEDS ME , but so many feel this and I , myself have turned a blind eye in hopes of ??? But we all know that does no Good!
after all ,...as your spectacular piece has reminded me ;
isnt good what we all are here for >?
or ought to be about !? sure you C ',..ARE!
BE BLESSED WITH REAL JOY FILLED LIFE AND PEACE',
EXCELLENT!!!!
Rich Criso
Trips of mercy please be kind, vision of world is still not defined. Land of plenty to see. Hearts of gold are free. Come test the waters walk teh streets, freedom of ideals are never lost, just slightly misguided....Walt
Reviewed by Heidi K (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2005
We are free to express ourselves in norway as well,and we try to create peace not war and that makes me proud.Couldn`t agree more ms Hottran ;)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
As Wilde said. America the only land to go from barbarianism to decadence without ever having a civilisation..
I've not a clue why if you aren't from the USA why it would embarrass you to start with.
or why you would even care.
We only wish for you a safe and happy life.
even with all of its faults, i'd rather live here than anywhere else, where we are free to express ourselves any way we like. Agree, disagree, or agree to disagree, this is the land i love!
great flow and rhyming, even though i don't agree :)
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
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RAge
after all ,...as your spectacular piece has reminded me ;
isnt good what we all are here for >?
or ought to be about !? sure you C ',..ARE!
BE BLESSED WITH REAL JOY FILLED LIFE AND PEACE',
EXCELLENT!!!!
Rich Criso
or why you would even care.
We only wish for you a safe and happy life.
Lisa
even with all of its faults, i'd rather live here than anywhere else, where we are free to express ourselves any way we like. Agree, disagree, or agree to disagree, this is the land i love!
great flow and rhyming, even though i don't agree :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)