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TO LOVE or not TO LOVE
by Toris Okotie → (All Poetry by Toris Okotie)
  
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Once upon a weary heart


Starts a life of teary dreams


Steams a moist of endless hope


Mope as snail caught a bunce


 


Wail in self-pity, howl with sorrow


A scramble heart creeps to ramble


Among the lonely streets of “Desire”


He prowls aimlessly with no avail


 


Discriminated by the passion of love


He shoved his way into ones heart


But with no sympathy by Love


His heart was crushed in immerse grieve


 


To love… he loved no more


And as the days grow by the years


Sitting on his rocking chair, he sat


Ready to die, a lonely old man


 


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 Reviews of "TO LOVE or not TO LOVE"
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2003
Wonderful depth of thought
~Jackie~

Reviewed on July 8, 2003
Outstanding poetry, Toris! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
So very sad but well written!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
Very Good Toris!

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Sad one. Feeling with this lonely old man.
Love
S

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Nice one, Toris.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003

Sad but true and it happens. Very good expression. Soul poetry.

Thanks,

Emilie

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
I really don't want to be that lonely old man!
Now Toris: share the fourth with America.

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