Gabrielle and Brianna
Niether one is a banana
They were born
But a minute apart.
Through a nursery pane
They broke my heart
It was love at first sight
Lovely as a piece of art.
Different
As night and day
I love them both
Just the same.
They're curious
As they watch me scribe
At eight years old
I allow the to read
Some of my writes.
I'm at awe, as they imulate
without guide
They too wish to write
About anything they feel
Is right.
Pick up a pen and scribble
they recite silly little riddles
into line, verses
Rhythm and rhymes.
By: William Bonilla
02/16/07
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Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2007
What a great mentor you are William. Simply lovely tribute to your grandaughters. A joy to read on a quick dip into your den. Go Grandpa! Love Panda :)
Beautiful girls, and a beautiful write my friend...yes, encourage them to write and express themselves. As a teacher I find that not enough parents care enough about their children's writing skills and do not enforce, or encourage them at all. Too many parents today allow games to dominate their children with too little reading and writing...Great job my friend, maybe you can post a family poem with the trio as the authors...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Lovely as a piece of art.
Indeed they are, Grandpa! And I know you teach them well.
George
I'm sure that someday the twins will
wirte as excellent as you do...
Just gorgeous little ladies...and your tribute to them, as well.
Grandchildren are the precious stones in our crowns!
Love&Blessings, Rhonda
Love,
Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Double the pleasure! Nice to meet them. :) A beautiful tribute.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
As a twin, I know the fun being a twin is. Most of the time. :)
And someone said "all I want for Xmas is my middle tooth..." with a most lovely smile!!!
Georg
This is a divine tribute..
Michael
Love Tinka