By
William “Dartagnan” Bonilla
&
Amber “V” Moonstone
2/10/08
~~*~~
(William )
Sing a song for me
Hum it when you’re alone
Whisper it to me
In passionate nights
While I am sensuously
Embracing you tight.
~*~
Kiss the lips you see
Before you
Craving
The delicious nectars
Of yours
For they are mine.
~*~
Make passionate love to me
You’ve been dwelling
For too long
Within
My sensuous thoughts
Of you.
~*~
Hold Me Tight
Kiss me once again
With delight
Engulf me deeply
In your arms
Don’t release me
Not tonight.
~*~
(Amber)
These arms were made for you,
these lips luscious too,
craving your sweetest song
making me belong
to your precious style
always brings a smile!
Come now, sensuous lover,
follow me under cover,
where lips and tender touch
can fulfill us, ever so much.
Radiant light always shining
when we come a dining
never a lament shall be unheard
while we whisper each word
Words of lover's never ending
lonely hearts that begin mending
to fulfill a promise made
and a favor to be paid.
It is time for trumpets blowing
and the heaven's eternally knowing
that we are heaven blessed
that gives fuel for our quest.
Tender touch,
moistened kisses,
filled with all
lover's
wishes!
Beautiful love poetry and so romantic!
Stunning vividness and longing!
Excellent collaboration!!
Brilliant piece
Peace love and hugssss and a
Happy Valentine's Day....Morning Star
This is a beautiful expression of longing and its fulfillment. You writing compliments each other well, and gives my heart a jolt of happiness. Keep collaborating.
William,
Yes indeed, this is a very amazing poem. So much tenderness and passion. So cohesive, I just love writing with you..We bring out the best in each other's writing ability...
Thank you for allowing our muses to blend..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Excellent poem and collaboration, although, someone need to go there and take you two a little appart from each other, the air around here are getting too warm.
Georg
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Outstanding write Amber and Bill...loved the flow of words speaking
softly...breathtaking...Love & Hugs, Peggy
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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Stunning vividness and longing!
Excellent collaboration!!
Brilliant piece
Peace love and hugssss and a
Happy Valentine's Day....Morning Star
God bless you, both. Kathy
Happy Valentine's Day my friend,
~Semper Fi
well done Amber and William...
John
Loved it!
Becca~
Yes indeed, this is a very amazing poem. So much tenderness and passion. So cohesive, I just love writing with you..We bring out the best in each other's writing ability...
Thank you for allowing our muses to blend..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
love, Carole~
Walt
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
for the wonderful Sensuous words you create
within your thought blend into mine like a soul satisfied
I am forever honored with such creative beauty.
Peace and love be always with you
William
Blessings and love,
Susan
This is gorgeous! Very well penned; brava! bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Christine
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Georg
softly...breathtaking...Love & Hugs, Peggy