Open Up To Him (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Open Up To Him
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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I am Not There Yet, I wish to thank 2 Great friends One a Personal, The other A fellow Den Dweller (You Know who You Are)I heed Your whispers To search the scriptures, where pain is healed, for you know Him too

Open Up To Him ~*~ I soaked the pain In my body as I showered Today Allowing hot water to slowly cascade Where my aches reside. I thought of all the songs Sonnets and poems I’ve written of you, of her Of all the beautiful Women Whom are the inspiration Of my vision. Then I realized Today I was able to move My arms More then I’ve been doing Prior to my praying with tears Of pain In the darkness of my lonely room. In the darkness of despair I thought I was beyond help This proved The power of prayer Is there For He is answering them As he see my one tear at a time. I closed my eyes humbly Confessing I’ve never been to the mountain top I’ve never sang praising hymns Nor gathered Down By the river side I’ve never laid down my sword and shield To study war no more. I’ve prayed For Him so see past the wall That surrounds me Incarcerating my soul Take way these webs Blocking my sight As I was blind, now I can see When I was lost I’ve been found. I now want to Pray To Him In the name of His Son Jesus Christ So I too Might one day Climb that mountain To witness He who resides On it’s Top. I want to lay down My sword and shield Down by the river side And study war no more Where we may gather By that river So I my learn so recite for Him My poetic praises Write for Him my sonnets And sing for Him Worthy Hymns. By: William Bonilla “D’Artagna” 10/28/09

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 9, 2009

This statement of truth brings tears to my eyes. It sounds like you and I could have been roommates, for I, too, have had the same feelings. I will add my prayers to yours that His healing will sustain you always.

On a personal note - I think that once we can say what is on our heart, He hears and provides us comfort - if we will but listen and embrace.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

feel you on this one William, last night my legs was killing me, of course I always pray, anyway woke up this morning and most of the pain was gone, I can walk amen brother

Reviewed by RICHARD SERRANO

Reviewed on November 4, 2009

nice cuz, realy worthy of praise!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 31, 2009

Thank you for sharing this, William. It seems to come from your soul. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

They don't come any better than this. Well done.

George

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Absolutely lovely, William. Positive energy and prayers coming your way...I'm sending them special delivery so you should get them real soon.

Anna

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

...dear sweet William this is absolutely beautiful. I am unaware of what difficulities you are facing but I will include you in my prayers. I am heading to your lovely state for a couple of relaxing weeks at the beach...stay strong, Bill!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Imagine yourself resting on Michelangelo Piet� Mary's lap, and you will understand that, despite pain, you will be alive to bless another day.
Bless you, my friend.

Georg

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Very glad to see that you are able to pen a few lines, William.
So sorry to learn of your difficulties. I've been riding the wave
of recovery with my dear Harbhajan who had a stroke in August; it was the power of prayer and the love of family and friends that
pulled us through those 38 days in hospital... Gratefully, he is making a remarkable comeback.
I shall gladly include you in my daily meditations, William. You've
given so much to us here at AuthorsDen and we want you to continue to do so! Be strong, reach out, and please don't isolate yourself.
With heartfelt best wishes for a speedy recovery,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

Oh, William, this is absolutely beautiful.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

...song from the heart...such passion and pain..very beautiful William...you have been missed!
Love and Blessings
Christine

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

When faced withg our own mortality we are humbled if we are astute. Me and my ordeal faced this abyss and lived to respect being humbled and to pray more for others' as you do Bill. I've truly missed reading your poetry . I will catch up.
Thank you for this poem. Each of us should be humbled. It's like seeing ourselves for the first time.
God bless you!
Susan

Reviewed by Jms Bell

AND ALREADY, WILLIAM, YOU 'SING' SO BEAUTIFULLY AND I KNOW...'HE' HEARS EVERY WORD AND SEES YOUR VERY SINCERE HEART. SO NOW...IT IS STRICTLY BETWEEN YOU AND HIM....LET NOTHING TURN YOU AROUND. GOD BLESS AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS VERY RICH BLESSING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William, dear man,
I have been praying for your pain to go away too! I have been sending you healing waves of energy, I am so glad to hear that you are doing just an ounce better...You must have faith, you must tell yourself that you are going to be better, you must walk that mile toward health. Please for me, for Norma, for all of your dear friends that care so much for you. I know how much pain you have been having, I have felt some of it, I take away your pain, I send you my healing vibrations please take them and be well...
Lovely poem out of a painful existence...You did good.. Now take that flight and come to Sweden and dance with Nyx, the Goddess of the Night, so that Georg and LaBelle can see just how great you and I are doing!!!

xo
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Beautiful write, William; so good to see you again! I have missed you; welcome home!

(((HUGS))), much love, and prayers~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

BEAUTIFUL, William. You are in my prayers, too. =]

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.