A Chateau By The Sea (A Collaboration) (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

A Chateau By The Sea (A Collaboration)
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Inspired By A Painting "Beached Boat Pallete" By C. Pierre Latour 1935-2006

A Chateau By The Sea (A Collaboration) By Michelle Mead & William Bonilla 01 15/10 Won't you come along with me upon this journey heavenly? where love and light are as endless as the widest deepest sea where roses crimson gathered are worn proud by ladies fair who gaze upon the water blue with a purple iris in their hair Mine is to fulfill your desires, escorting you to where lovers dream Walking through perfumed lingering distant chateaus Embroidered in floral hues, offsetting pristine stucco walls where beautiful women are awed upon, near the mystic sea. Yes, I'll follow you then, arm in arm, anywhere you choose, we'll rest our sun-drenched bodies in rooms with scenic views, I'll open up your white shirt and then kiss your chest so tan, we'll make love long and sweet, and I'll tell you you're my man We reside in a world rule by passionate desires, are my thoughts Hands undress my guard in a paradise blessing our sight Leaving me in my nakedness of birth, soft tender lips shower my body With heavenly kisses, gentle hands search to conqueror my soul The night was clear, the moon was full, silvery beam witnessed love.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 18, 2010

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 17, 2010

A fine collaborative piece, William. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Thank you, William- I found it very easy to work with you and blend our styles and that we did it naturally without lots of pretentious fuss. Maybe that's because we are a couple of no-nonsense, down to earth New Yorkers, lol! I'm so glad we had this chance to work together. Blessings always, Michelle :) xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

...exquisite collaboration, William and Michelle. well done

Carole~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Thank You Michelle
For selecting me to compose a collaboration with you
I am so deeply honored
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 16, 2010

Nicely done, you two. Lovely work.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Andy Turner

The stanzas that rhyme are fab.
A good sign or rule of thumb to good poetry, is if one can read and grasp a poem just by the last words of each line.
A fine wine partnership. Top drawer.
The two styles make for one top poem.

BTW it's a loooong way down to review, there seems to be a tech' hitch.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

if the moon could talk! ;-)
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Lovely work!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 15, 2010

Indeed a lovely collaboration, you and your co-author did a lovely job indeed.
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