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It's Painful
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It’s Painful

~*~

 

Oh! My darling

Please take it out

She cried out softly

It hurts too much,

It ached my heart

For I was aware

Of the pain, I was causing

Though

I was doing it, as gently

As all possible

Comforting her

I sat her on my lap,

Sweetheart your hurting me

She repeated

I kissed a single tear

Escaping her eyes.

~*~

 

I kissed her once again

Whispering

Let me do it one more time

Promising it won’t hurt

This time we’ll do it

Under a light,

Be gentle with me my love

She tearfully begged

I slowly took

Her finger in my hand

Attempting

To remove the rose thorn

That was causing the pain

Extracting it, I sealed it

With a tender kiss

Whispering

I Love You.

~~~*~~~

 

 

By: William Bonilla

D’Artagnan”

2/20/2010

 

 
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 Reviews of "It's Painful"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
IN THE MIDST OF DISCOMFORT...ONE GIVES THE ONLY THING THAT CAN SOOTHE...LOVE. LOVELY IMAGERY WILLIAM...ENJOYED. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
I like the way this piece flows, William. I also like how you built a sense of mystery in this poem. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
Enjoyed the tease of romance with a touch of humor, William...well done my friend!
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Oh sure, you expect me to believe that lame explanation Sir?
Reviewed by S. Suber
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Sensual & caring all rolled into one poem. Well done!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
....sealed with a kiss makes it all better!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
So beautiful, William, what a tender write! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Cela Shearer
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Very contrite and very well spoken. I enjoyed!
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Romance and naughty humor-Perfect!
Carolyn
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
I was hooked from the first line, and not entirely sure where the story was going.....awesome write, William!!!!! Very cleverly penned!

Anna
Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Beautiful.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Shows a loving tender heart
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 24, 2010
Oozing tenderness as hearts flutter...well done!!!

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
William, this is clever and so sweet.
Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
You almost got me there, William. :) But i think it is more romantic than having just a tiny, tiny bit of humor. Written so nicely, light and carefree. Blessings to you.

Best Wishes,
Sheri
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Beautiful and romantic
Love and tenderness
my mind was running wild and my
Eyes reading faster LOL
Excellent twist
William I know this was a fun write
Wishing you Peace Love and Light….Yolie
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
sweet write
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
You're wicked, William, and Elizabeth's honest reaction says it all. Clever and charming...and wicked!

John
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
William,
This is a tender poem, and you used a picture that I have used myself, I love this photo!
I am doing Beauty and The Beast and the Rose is a very important prop in this story..It is the symbol of undying love..
Nicely written, D'Artagnan!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
OH my imagination ran wild on what was hurting your loved one. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Beautiful write, William; well done! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
sexy smooth romantic verse William, cheers
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Too romantic on your part, Sir Bill...ed
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Truly sweet and compelling, William and very evocative as well. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis
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