Back in the attic again today. This poem is from the days when I lived in New Orleans prior to Katrina.
Upon the roof high above it all
I look below and ache to call
Please come to me from where you will
I'm way up here awaiting still
You see I reign above it all
For fear that love will make me fall
For wanting more than can be given
For seeking what I know as Heaven
In this place where darkness reigns
Where city lights go untamed
Right next to where the Mississippi runs
Where the sound of Blues can come undone
Alas I'm where I ought to be
My silhouette high above the trees
With eyes shining in the midnight blue
Wishing for more than I could use
Here is happiness in a smile dressed well
In the facade of a lady in her own Hell
For to take less would be unfair
To this Southern woman who waits up here
Its Blues at Midnight while New Orleans sleep
And way up here this Rebel weeps.
Yearning love ballad that speaks from the heart to the passion of the city of the blues. Well done Susan.
Fee
Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
~~Susan~~somehow i see those eyes through shining through a deep blue...this poem does have the touch of lonely..still, there's the Rebel...beautiful~~
~~martin~~
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
This ones a gem, Susan..I love New Orleans. My ex's family is from there and I love the food, those crawfish boils at family gatherings..yummm
XXxx dove
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Oh my, those dirty old, mean blues
give that girl her walking shoes
sitting high up, above the street
no one is there for her to meet
Susan
We should never settle for second best in life...
If we do, we are only shortchanging ourselves..
Let's hope the damsel in distress is rescued by her hero, and the
Big Easy builds a better and brighter future..
Peter
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Eye's can't get the blues at midnight cuz ma cones is shut down for the night and all's ma rods can see is shades o' gray. A hears em fine, tho.
Seriously, your attic reminds me of my first hot nights in Houston. Dust some more off.
Ron
Fee
~~martin~~
XXxx dove
give that girl her walking shoes
sitting high up, above the street
no one is there for her to meet
We should never settle for second best in life...
If we do, we are only shortchanging ourselves..
Let's hope the damsel in distress is rescued by her hero, and the
Big Easy builds a better and brighter future..
Peter