He Leaves (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 18, 2006

Let me know when he leaves--I comes. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on June 14, 2006

These are words that reflect situations unknown to most. They are blessed to not have to endure them. At a certain point however enough is enough when preventing something to snap is no longer possible. There is a world of agony behind this brief expression.

RAge

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 14, 2006

Very powerful ...short but to the point...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 14, 2006

Short. Succinct. Powerfully P E R F E C T! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 14, 2006

Short and awesome

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 14, 2006

Susan
Very potent and intense ku...
I agree with Jerry and Trask
Keep on smiling...
Love and Harmony
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 14, 2006

Most powerful, Susan, as is the graphic.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 14, 2006

Brisk like iced tea and lemon this ku leaves the reader impressed with the sentiments it contains. Complimented by the graphic it has almost a spectral feel to it. As a writer the first thing that came to my mind was a writer pining the loss of her muse. Interesting to see how others "perceive".
Fee

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on June 13, 2006

succinct and potent. art is amazing. Dawn

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on June 13, 2006

Wow ... powerfully true it seems Susan!
6 penetrating words that find their mark!! Great image to complement.
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 13, 2006

to the point! a sad perception indeed ...

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 13, 2006

We survive
We revivive
because
we're alive
:)
pax A

you will be ok!!
his loss