Tears Chase Sorrow (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2006

Very lonely and sad write.
Gods speed,Happy New Year!

Michael

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

This season brings so many memories back to us -some glorious -some inevitably connected to our deepest sorrows. Yes,
"Like a hum in ill refrain
Tears chase sorrow
Comes again."
Written with a heavy heart by a gifted hand.
~Butch

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

"Every sense we have is toyed with and treated to this spectacular high once a year." yes indeed, Susan ... follow your heart ... let sorrow diminish ... wise words once told me, "enjoy it" ...

very powerful emotional affect ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

Like the image, this ne is obscure. However, its cadence get to you like and old song and tugs the heartstrngs down.

Ron

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

What is it about the Holidays?
Brings out the best
Exposes the worst
A poets curse
Or how he/she gets in touch with the universe?
DWB

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

"Like a hum in ill refrain" I love this line. Life and Love are both
so sad and yet so glorious. This time of year the memories always come flooding in. "Ebbing woes of rusted years come alive in endless tears abundantly...this fated song Never really did belong" I can so relate to this I know I'm different too. What a great write really
enjoyed it. Love Pierre.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

u always have something special up your sleeve--"rusted years come alive in endless tears" is precious keep going and a hug

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

"Ebbing woes of rusted years"

Susan, you shine with these words of sorrow. The depth of emotion is
full and complete...excellent piece.

Allen

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

TEARS CHASE SORROW evokes surge after surge of dreamy melancholy and poignant remembrance. A poem with which to sit down, pour a fresh cup of tea, and unapologetically indulge oneself.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

An excellent composition
To a sad offering
Peace be with you

Merry Crhistmas To you & family Susan
Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

Ebbing woes of rusted years
Come alive in endless tears

I feel this line. Corroded years oiled and released by tears from which to extract the good parts and live them as they should be lived.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

Sad offering Susan...seems like you "digged" into the archives of my own stupid life!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

We all have our sad moments which you descibe so eloquently in this poem. Victor

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

Ebbing woes of rusted years... Powerful metaphors in this sad write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

Another Chorus from the wing
Tears are not what love should bring
Lovely lady heart so pure
I'll kiss away your tears for sure!

Lovely write and one I can almost hear being written into a ballad and song soft and low to an acoustic guitar and mandolin strings
Sweet... Susan
Hugs
Fee