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Missing It's Shine
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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From my attic... this one is a favorite.


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Tomorrow when the sun comes up,
my shine will pale, my doors are closed
I've learned the value of passion
that holds the moans of a silent glow

The hard part of loving and the part that fails,
the mission of focus that got out of hand
In growing together, now parted,
no value in the vagueness of now, I don't understand

Give me a reason, calm my desires,
the ones that are flickering and pleading for more
For the one who danced with me,
embraced me, then felt our love grow

My knees are weaker, gone are the plans
you know the ones of floating through skies
Smelling the flowers and walking the paths
hand in hand humming, no reasoning denied

Future and laughter, the comfort and bliss
the fighting that ends in a tenderness kiss
The clutch for a moment, moonlight all around
the smile so electric with the shine that I'll miss

My heart is like his, with pride entrapped
sheltered from love, my what a grind
Broken down guesses with missives amiss,
barely hearts beat when missing it's shine.

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 Reviews of "Missing It's Shine"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Missing It[Is] Shine is a song of sorrow, of love's expectation lost. Its shine is darkly clear.

Ron

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
I kept feeling the push and pull of this...almost as an indecision in the decision to part...wondering what it eould be like and then realizing in retrospect...My heart dropped in the end, even though I knew where you were headed.
I had to look deeply into that attic. What a fabulous picture...jewel-like quality to that glass.
Excellent write Suzie Q....but you caught me crying!
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
Very romantic. Makes one feel younger. Victor

Reviewed on January 10, 2007
My heart is like his, with pride entrapped
sheltered from love, my what a grind
Broken down guesses with missives amiss,
barely hearts beat when missing it's shine.

Read with a sigh of resignation.
Touching word of reflection.

Reviewed on January 10, 2007
POWERFULLY emotive, poignantly expressed--well done, Susan!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
This is very good, Susan -- it's also one of my favorites from you now. Excellent emotion blended with thoughts.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
I've never been able to grow closer to someone without feeling I was growing farther away from them at the same time. Excellent Pierre.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
very moving poetry, Susan ... i see why it's one of your favorites ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
As always you've touched me with this one again Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
Wonderful, painful, cautious, yet spirited... Another ode to loving and love lost. I so enjoy your writing. Thank you...
love,
simon

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
Susan,how sad this is.Love your poems,thanks for sharing.
God Bless,
Michael

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
Poetry is such a nice escape when we write of the true realities of life and love, yours is one which displays the many emotions of one who has touched of this experience...


nicely penned.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
Beautifully penned from the heart my friend, wonderful line; My heart is like his, with pride entrapped...
enjoyed this one much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
Your heart dear Susan will shine eternally, even if the maker some day calls you home your heart will continue to shine as a star in the heavens looking down to set the mood for young lovers and old alike for eternity. Thank you for always making us believer in life and love.
Hugs,
Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
A sad ending and that is part of life but we must move on.


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