Did You Feel The Rain Today? (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Love the piter pater of the rain matching the beating of the passioned heart--nice juxtoposition.

Ron

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

This is very Beautiful Susan!
I love your flowwwwwwwww and word play/feelings here!
I could feel the lightness in the rain,while reading every line~

WArmest Blessings and HuGs,Warrior Sheeeooxx
P.s. Thank you for all your heartfelt Kind words, in my corner of the den!

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Susan, you touch deeply the emotions with this write. I can relate so well to my favorite lines:
"If miracles were possible
I'd will you here with me
To climb the highest mountains
Then power play the seas"
I felt the rain too!
~Butch

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

I love when you write these romantic sensuous titillating love poems. This sets a sexy mood!;-)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

Nice write...a peaceful feeling when reading, just like a slow rain gives.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

I know you felt the rain today
Just as I did too
Passions love the drizzle
From eyes of mine to you
Did you feel the rain today?
Falling down your face
Was your heart a pitter patter
As our beats began to race. BEAUTIFUL!! :)) K xx

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

Time and space often rip out our hearts, but sometimes they lose their merciless grip on our souls. These instants we cherish - inside them we touch upon Truth. It is a gentle reminder to us that time and space are nothing but a transient prison from which we will be freed, never to return.

RAge

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

This is very nice, Susan! Gentle, like rain is. Again very nice!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

This one kisses the face as a gentle rain.......beautifully presented passion builds to a joyful climax! Yes. Susan, I love this one, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

A marvelous poem, Susan.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

Susan,

I enjoyed the rhyme and flow of the poem and the passion of your words. Words that connect two hearts.

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

If only the gentle rain could fill the depths of the longing in our souls and bring all lost lovers together, Maybe someday it will. Your words amaze me. Love this, Pierre.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

Beautiful write Susan, always full of emotion

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

Beautiful poetry Susan
your writes I enjoy and savor
With delight

Love & Peace

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

I loved crawling inside this poem, getting in out of the rain for a wistful look out the window and a chance to wonder. I felt the rain...
Thanks Susan.
Love,
~Taylor

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

You pittered pattered our hearts as we read this beautiful poem. Kudos to you, Susan. Victor

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

Masterful use of imagery and romance tugs on heart strings. Well done my dear Susan well doen.

Fee

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

I surely did! Wonderful write Susan. Ahhh, love that gentle rain.
love you,
simonb

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

Wonderful write, Susan!!! I enjoyed!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

Cute write with sweet romance,