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Do You Remember?
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Do you remember when?

Oh YES my love
I know where love has been
When in total absorption we wrote our passions out
With true dedication we simply wore time out
The love we shared in olden
times was just the beginning
Each kiss was passion's metamorphasis
In those days, as love was sturring

My love, do you remember our first kiss?

I remember, as was yesterday, your lips upon my flesh
Awakening my morning, moaning as we meshed
Vintage and aged wine, the best I'd ever tasted
Drizzled lightly on my lips as you sipped in traces
Falling fluid raptures as waiting breasts were basted
Then traded as your lips met mine , not a drop was wasted.

Do you remember our dance?

My dance card will always hold a special dance for you
For night-long waltzing, for times when you are blue
To hold me ,dearest Love, for always and a day
To bond with you complete, in passions hottest sway
To caress the years forever, as our spirit's blend
In time's capsulated passages for all our inbetweens.

Do you remember when?

Yes my Love of centuries
As often as I can
As often as my lungs breathe each living breath
Until the time comes anew to love within your flesh.

I will always remember.

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 Reviews of "Do You Remember?"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
Damn! I forgot! Guess I'll have to try love one more time to refresh my memory.

Ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
What a glorious poem of eternal, unconditional love!
So beautifully and passionately portrayed! Brava, Susan!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
Most wonderful offering Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 31, 2007
Sigh.........romance is you, Susan; this one is GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
Great Valentine!!!
Spring air must be filling your lungs. . .
And reached your tongue.
DWB

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
memories can be so rich and provide us a platform of entertainment. much luck

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
You remember very well!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
Beautiful write my friend, very peaceful and passionate!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Chris Rosenau
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
This is an absolute wonderful poem. Great use of words. You have put great feeling into this piece.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
What a wonderful poem. In my oppinion this is perfection!

Reviewed by Verne Washington (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
I liked it...Good rhyming.
Linking dance with love worked really well and you captured it with a good overall mood.
Ive got a couple suggestions though. Although the rhyming was good, maybe sometimes it is better to leave the scheme for better words.
I enjoyed everything except "as my lungs breath each living breath."
I just feel like I've heard that line too many times...
either way it works
Good job

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
passionate memories are those which endure time ... you poetically dance through the emotions and sentiments of love's memory, brought to life again and again ...

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
That was a refreshing glimpse into an eternal love affair. I can picture you dancing in the clouds.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
Sensual memories of timeless love wrapped in the warmth of your heart...this is stunning.
Precious
Special
Warm
Tender


Fee

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
Oh what memories you have,awesome write full of love and passion.
Well done,

Michael

Reviewed on January 30, 2007
Do you remember...?

The outstretched hand of love imprints itself upon our heart and mind in such a way that we become fully consumed within its warm, comforting bosom. From within this bliss we engage with the object of our desire: 'Do you remember...?'

This is a lovely song as well as a poem. Could have been a duet between Astaire and Rogers.


Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
Sweet memories of passionate days.


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