This is a repost, since I'm still in school here in Phoenix, for Mariah Rowse, my daughter.
Love,
Mom
There's nothing more incredible than the laughter of a child
The innocence of dalliance with laughing gooey smiles
Chocolate covered laughter gives such inner peace
Even if the Hershey's was someone else's treat
The cornered grins all brown from sweets, the wider eyes that smile
The broken giggles of these two...a momma and her child
Remembered days when curls came down with peanut buttered whirls
Then jelly laughter sprung a leak and kisses caught the curls
The taste and joys of this love a child with innocence
A mothers brightened afternoon when hearts and laughter spent
These hurting ribs from giggles, the constant white of teeth
The tumbles on the cold oak floor with kisses all so sweet
Memories of a mothers love, the laughter rings in techno
I keep these treasures in my heart and every day they echo
Mariah's curls, her wicked smile, the one that showed no mercy
The shadows of a thought just caught with her Momma's Hershey's.
a beautiful write Susan,
reminds me of the day when
my children were totlers
Once I gave my wife a brake
so she may relax, I took my dughter
3 years old then, too the zoo,
looking like a little princess
When I returned she looked like
she was playing in mud and lips
covered with chocolate ice cream,
That day she ripped mea new *&%$$#.^
If you know what I mean.
Thank you again, for taking me there.
Thought the pic was a kama sutra frieze, my Fruedian slip. I had chocolate this morning. It didn't remind me of mommie, but it did melt before I popped it in my mouth all gooey.
Get well... ur... over your classroom disease soon.
How delightful and whimsical is this beauty!
You are so gifted Susan!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
HAHA, Yup nothing like the joy of kids, when they've been naughty and look guilty, I just fall over laughing, water in my eyes, trying to say tut tut, but just give up... Brilliant..
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
Good memories as only hersey kisses can bring...lady j
So many wonderful memories I have of my children growing up. My joy in that time I spent with them is immeasurable This is truly written from your heart.
Love Pierre.
As always whether you are writing about lovers, wildlife or your favorite little girl (Mariah) you do it with such passion that your love almost glows on the page. Well done expression of a forever love.
Fee
I loved this giggly write! - i don't have kids but this reminded me so much of a little friend of mine called Lola - sweet smiles and endless giggles - lovely :o) Nicky x
This poem is a lot like Chocolate Kisses... very good any way and any where you find them... no matter whose they might be. Chocolate by any other name is a Susan Poem! - Bill
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reminds me of the day when
my children were totlers
Once I gave my wife a brake
so she may relax, I took my dughter
3 years old then, too the zoo,
looking like a little princess
When I returned she looked like
she was playing in mud and lips
covered with chocolate ice cream,
That day she ripped mea new *&%$$#.^
If you know what I mean.
Thank you again, for taking me there.
love & "Kisses"
william
Get well... ur... over your classroom disease soon.
Ron
You are so gifted Susan!
Love,
Eileen
Love Tinka
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Love Pierre.
Be safe,
Karen
sweet reminiscent!
brings a smile
Walt
Fee
I'm one of the rare ones, don't like chocolate, but this write is even sweeter (and look, Ma, no calories!). Beautiful write, enjoyed.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.