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Try To Behave
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Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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The first of passions with a faceless memory and the youthful lessons of a nubile girl. ~SKdeV~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Midnight's dark moon aflow on the waves Innocence calling- "try to behave" Silhouettes bond on beaches� white sands Walking embraced... hands gripping hands Thoughts all together, a sameness festooned Hearts raw and beating under this moon Louder the silence of midnight forsakes Two lover's passion... pushing their brakes Each step of innocence comes a new dare Caressing this mystery and pleasuring cares Reaching for something , risking their ruin Touching the rhythm of their own wrong-doing Collapsing on sand dunes...legs weaving slow Bathed in the moonlight's phosphorous glow Body's heaving with each rushing wave It's too late now as nothing behaves Moisture is beading as energies fly Arching to arches...moans meeting sighs Thunderous lightening with no storm in sight A dance with the devil in the pale moonlight. Copyright �2002 �

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Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 15, 2007

Incredible imagery and write. Youth - it is hard to behave when you're caught-up in THAT moment.

Kathy

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2007

Really nicely written. Tension, sensuality, and youthful curiousity rolling up like waves on your shore line.
simonb3

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

Innocence knows no behavior, wonderful write,

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

Left me wishing I was there, and... breathless!

Ron

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

The Devil made 'em do it.

Walt

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

Get outta the way devil, I know what I'm doing!!! Beautifully done . . .

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

Dancing with the devil in the pale moonlight - marvelous!

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

All realism starts with energy ~ Devil is nonexistent ~love & goodness~Ted

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

Very, very well said and felt Susan. Superbly written.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on October 14, 2007

Sensual and liberating write...Don't ever start behaving...;)

Edwin

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

Holysmokes, Susan, me monitor just melted...whoo! EXCELLENT.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

Susan you know we can't behave sis;-)This is captivating,overflowing with passion!oo la la! Enjoy!;-)

Love,
ET

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

luv the atmosphere and imagery to this poem, Susan ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

You have been writing for a while, and I enjoyed this one, no matter when it was written. Very wonderful pen here Susan.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

well written poem-

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

A Beautiful sensuous write Susan
most enjoyable reading
Peace & love be with you

William

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