Refractions of a Minute (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 27, 2007

Great retro piece. Hindsight is always 20-20.

Ron

Reviewed on October 19, 2007

I'm sure that picture of one so full of hope is still there. Your poems reflect that aspect of you.

Kathy

Reviewed on October 18, 2007

Tremendous Title Belle! The application of your imagery seems almost insouciant, but it works well in context to the gist as snippets of old memories, or how the mind oftentimes remembers in flashes and bits. Exceptional ...
Richard

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 18, 2007

Although we play games like this to forget the past... we always remember the visual.

Yes, we certainly do.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 18, 2007

Many years .....High school long since over....Still the hottie you are...LOL

Walt

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 18, 2007

Susan, I feel that you are very content with whatever this decision was. You have come a long way baby, as the saying goes..Peaceful and lovely images here in this poem..nicely written.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 18, 2007

Well done Susan. The past may be gone but it is never forgotten.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

An excellent piece Susan
we can no longer reach for the past
Or is the future tangible
Now we must grin and bear
Live one day at a time,
still I love reminiscing
Peace & Love be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

this was very clever and original-loved it1

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

I love how you did this Susan. It isn't easy to write of oneself, and this is a splendid msmoir. Love the pic,as beautiful as a rose;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

We may sever the past but it is always with us.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

The PAST is vital to who we are . . . never forget it . . .

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

Live NOW....Stuff the past, life will be over in a decade or so...Go get....

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

What reflects
Shouldn't be hard to detect
What glows
Everybody knows
In this poem it shows.
Beautifully done
Another one
Vintage
Great title and closing 5 lines.
Doug

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on October 17, 2007

The best attributes refined & remain ~Oh my ~love Ted