Tangled up in bed sheets
Dreaming of the moment
Hair amuss from passion
Walls are fogged in golden
Tinges of the outlay
Thoughts in prism's glow
Roasted flesh , marooned and blushed
In a dreamy overflow
Meditated passion
Green silk of the very best
Lavish fluids flowing
In every fevered breath
Alone with thoughts a'burning
One in two is drenched
Doesn't take a genuis
Once this love is quenched.
Hmnn this almost feels like a female reponse to my write from the other day...Bahelor Glory Days (and nights). Very well done and definately shows the female perspective quite well.
hugs
Fee
You nailed this one my friend...excellent imagery, flows smoothly and at a wonderful pace...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
What a wonderfully sensual and revealing piece of poetry. I enjoyed the sensations as well as the vivid, evocative imagery. You have a direct, yet gentle touch of the pen that pierces the consciousness with potent pictures. Fabulous writing!
Terrific! Heating and exciting.
Been there, done that... but not that well.
Your brevity is beaming in this write.
Am going outdoors, now... to cool down, of course.
- Bill
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Passion spent . . . Sated for the moment . . . Whisper of silk amid the nector of love . . . Sighs give credence to passion well spent . . .
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I love this write!
Love, Pierre
Love,
ET
lovely poem, Susan ...
Thoughts in prism's glow
Roasted flesh , marooned and blushed
In a dreamy overflow
Sue...........wow.........
very visual and erotic....you should publish!!!
have you??? pax A
hugs
Fee
well done...
John
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Allen
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Been there, done that... but not that well.
Your brevity is beaming in this write.
Am going outdoors, now... to cool down, of course.
- Bill
Peace,
Dan