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More To Prove
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Thoughts of you are as everyday...as seconds are to time
I can dream each curled up lip as if each smile were mine
The sparkle you have when you look...way off to catch a dream
The stretch you give to movements from fingers in a life's stream.
The grin that wants to burst from laughter hiding in your head
The mighty ways you have so strong when others think too big
You scale that dream and go for broke and when I think you're through.
You take a step a little further just because you're you
You give everything you have to most everything you do
Then when I think you have no more you have much more to prove.
You...you are the genius...the child who is inside...
This man whose spirit runs to play and with his passions, bide
The amazing difference in a soul is when it isn't shy
Instead you hold out your wings then take that draft and fly
You my dear are a prince of royal feelings true
You beat a breath into my heart then take a little too
Just leave me something to get by in case there comes the chance
To hold much tighter to the dream that asked me here to dance
My dance card will always hold a chance to sway with you
To sip the moment just for tears that need the drying too
You are a handsome man of words and fondest dreams that play
So often thinking "what if" comes...and takes my heart away.

© 2008 Susan Kathryn de Vegter
  

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 Reviews of "More To Prove"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
You make me blush...

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
Oh Susan your mastery of romance and the male/female passionate relationships is superb. Love this one.

Fee

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
SK, you don't have to prove to anyone
When it comes to romantic poetry
You're the best
Doug

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
...wishes...of one well worth remembering...on an open dance card of dreams...as if walked into ones life...remains.
wonderful Susan...
John

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
A beautiful expression of love, dear Susan.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
You are a master at these, Lady, Thank you.

Walt

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
"So often thinking "what if" comes...and takes my heart away"

I liked this hold out for another day Susan...well expressed emotion.

Allen

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
I like this poem...shows depth and emotions of a love deeper than the external view...when love touches the soul it is enriched beyond dreams...

truly nice work, Susan...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
splendid prose that captivates the senses and casts a spell until the last word. Superb description of the man...Awesome write Susan!

ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
a beautiful write-passionate and full of emotion

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
The amazing difference in a soul is when it isn't shy <-----words to be immortilised.

Great work, uplifting work.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
A bubbly passionate write

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
I really enjoyed the pictures of poetic chance.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
This is simply one of the fine tuned orchestrations of hearts_This should be hung in hallways of buildings yet to be built & added to all the others already standing~Much beauty in sharing such profound warmth.~.Adding to the beauty of the cosmos indeed .~.ovvoelle_Ted

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
A beautiful piece susan
Of longing some one special to you
peace & Love be with you

William


Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
You don't write poems, you write passion . . . that is all I have to say . . .

Reviewed on January 14, 2008
Such beautiful passionate longing, Susan, well done!! Few write romance like you. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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