Your desire to win amazes me
For in my heart you'll always be
In life we've seen ups and downs
We learn from life ...we settled down
Through Hells fire we've waded strong
It is right here where I belong.
In autumn as the winds build strong
When geese fly south our love is strong
With every chill between night's turn
Flesh to flesh the fire's will burn
To dwell within a heart in song
Enforces love that here belongs.
The boy in you nourishes the awe
As love runs on til spring time thaws
The girl in me is overwhelmed
From boyish passion where I dwell
Young love builds ...ages with grace
As lines of history embrace your face
My tears are dedicated vows of true
Love for the boy embraced in you .
Susan, truly a lovely write, it's amazing how the little things in our love can mean so much...eventhough hardships snarl at us and nip at our behinds we still love the person even more. You've been on my mind all day...hope all is going well.
Yes to keep alive the child in all of us is to be able to keep the world from breaking us down and when we can do this we take ohers along for the ride or they us. Love the picture sweet Susan.
hugs
Fee
Exquisite. A most beautiful tribute to love...well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Taking on the boy in the man and understanding the ferver which that entails is a major and positive undertaking . . . As usual, Susan, you wear your heart on your pretty lacy sleeves . . .
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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WELL penned Sue
always compassionate and loving, pax A
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Fee
excellent Susan...
John
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enjoyed much ...
Love,
ET
Exquisite. A most beautiful tribute to love...well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.