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You're Still Needed
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Written for my two son's, now in their 40's and with families of their own. The cycle of life continues.


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YOU'RE STILL NEEDED
 
I've tried to live my life
so that one day you'd both say,
“If I could pick anyone as my father,
I'd have picked you every single day.”
 
Your granddad would be one hundred.
Your momma? Almost sixty five.
And, I'm sure our world would differ,
if they both were still alive.
 
Life didn't work out that way,
so it does little good to ponder,
but if Dad had lived to teach me,
would things have differed, I wonder?
 
Would his words of wisdom,
when I might have needed correction,
better have prepared me
to push you in the right direction?
 
And, if you hadn't lost your mom,
when still just in your teens,
you'd both have all her wisdom,
at least, to me that's how it seems.
 
Still, I guess we're quite lucky,
there are some in dire straits.
So far, we've been able to handle
anything heaped upon our plates.
 
We always pull together
whenever there's a need.
It's much thicker than water,
this family blood we bleed.

So during these troubled times,
in our struggle to survive,
try to keep in mind we're fortunate,
cause at least we're still alive.
 
You are both still needed,
you’re not to the end of your line.
You’ve both still more to give
though I’m running short on time.
 
One day you’ll be looking back
at those bringing up your rear.
I hope you’ll be as proud of them
as I was of you, while I was here.
 

© copyright 2010, Richard Lee King

Author of: A PURSUIT OF LIFE & THE PRICE OF FREEDOM

Co-Author of:  THE HINTS BOOK SERIES 

 


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 Reviews of "You're Still Needed"
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
A beautiful revelation of a loving father's heart. TY for sharing it with us.

Reviewed by Judith Ann (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2010
A very loving, feeling well written poem that your sons will cherish all their lives.

Reviewed by INNOCENT AGBO
Reviewed on May 31, 2010
I have become a captive to these lines. I must share share it with friends.YOU'RE GREAT!and so is your poem.Kudos!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 29, 2010
Nicely done Dick, sweetly opposite to the "Cat's in the cradle" Patrick

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on May 28, 2010
M a r v e l o u s.

If this is what happens when a person shies away from being a banker,
let's hope more bankers take the leap!!

What a terrible shame it would have been to let talent like this
lie.

Rhyme works great, and the message is loud and clear. {A n d gentle and sweet:)}

Keep 'em comin' !!

xOx Phyllis xOx

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 28, 2010
This is wonderful poetry. I am feeling the cycle of life strongly right now, and here in your poem you put it into such compassionate writing.

Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on May 28, 2010
That has to be one of your BEST! Very touching!

Donna


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