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your own Azz
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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For all you thinking advice folks I wrote this from my own experience. My life changed when I found my real enemy. It was me, full of negativity, phony pride, too mean and hateful. Of course I changed quite a few years back. Now my life is a lot better, maybe not the best, but better. Any positive improvement is better than none. So goes my poem.........


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Your own azz,
you can't even get pass.
It may lead the way,
in your activities today.
Even tomorrow,
it could have you in
joy or sorrow.
Might as well add life time,
it could have you living in crime.


Under your own might,
you feel you are right,
so you put up a fight.
Here's the way it go,
you could be fighting
the wrong foe.
The real enemy could be inside,
taking you on its evil ride.
So you fail to see,
Mind clogged up with phony pride.


God speaks loud,
tries to get you under his shroud.
The devil performs mirage,
helps pull your ride out of the garage.
Off you go running fast,
not knowing it maybe your last.


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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
Don't know how I missed this one but I did. We are our own worst enemy at times, I agree. Some choose to do nothing about their condition, but you have and I do believe that deserves an applause. God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
Very good poem, my friend -- they say that we're our own worst enemy and I tend to agree. I'm so glad you've found your way -- I know poetry is a wonderful release for me, and I believe it is for you, too. I enjoyed this poem!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
You are right again my friend, we can and will get in trouble with this type of attitude, and as Rosemarie stated the real enemy sometimes lies within ourself. Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
I like the line, "The real enemy could be inside,". Excellent write. R

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
Very well dine Grady~~

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
Great write Indeed...Hugsssssssssssss

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
It's great that you saw the need to conquer
and make changes deep inside yourself and trusting
in God to get you through the Devils mistakes.
Thanks for sharing,Great work,
God Bless,
Michael


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