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a Perfect 10
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I can't be beat any worse, the only thing I haven't done is died.


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A perfect ten missing nine,
just like this life of mine.
Nine digits off,
life hasn't landed soft.
I don't miss the other fractions,
even though they're
important subtractions.


I deal with the one remaining,
at least I have something sustaining.
I could have lost all ten,
have to start completely over again.
I know one digits not much,
but it's the important one
that kept me in touch.


Some run with a phony superior,
they can't deal with being inferior.
When you've lost almost all,
with the devil coming to call,
and you're still here,
even one digit is most dear.


One

 


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 Reviews of "a Perfect 10"
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Powerful write One! Yes, one is all it takes ... thoroughly dear when it's still here!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Most creative!! R

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Love this, you are a very creative poet my friend...wouldn't have meant as much if it came from anyone other...love the last line...and you're still here even one digit is most dear...enjoyed this much!
Blessings my friend,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Creative offering...A perfect ten indeed!!

Love tinka ")

Reviewed on January 14, 2007
I found this write quite interesting ONE!
The Who- is my 1st thought here... ! is the LOneliest # that you ever knew... 2 can be as bad as 1 - it's the...
I love your Positive Upbeat attitude Charm : )
Reminds me a cat with 9 lives too!
You my dear are a perfect 10
With such honesty pourring out of your pen!

Warmest HuGs, Warrior Sheeeooxx

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
When I read your title I thought of Bo Derek. Then it brought a few laughs but now I'm hoping that you are healthy and well and stay this way for a very long time. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
bravo, One! this is perfect proof of your great appreciation and attitude..

Gina

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
very creative... :)

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Wow...that really sums up a ten
different I liked it's very cool
One poet I love you your message
Within this poem it's long as you
have the most important digit of life
that gives you strength and peace to your
heart you're a complete 10!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
very well written excursion to your life's equation ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Very well put, Grady. I always forget that you are now "One Poet" and often miss reading your offerings.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
too cool. i really like this


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