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Lights, Camera, Action
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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There was something wrong with this play...


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Lights, camera, action,
love provides more satisfaction.
In the camera light,
love shined more bright,
all around did delight.
In the camera eye pointing,
love was more anointing.


While the film was rolling,
the actors were merrily strolling.
This was a movie of fun,
not a production of none.
After all the hate parts,
all had tarnished hearts.


Love scenes provided more joy,
hate roles only destroy.
Even the actors playing,
didn't want the hate scenes staying.
The director finally did say,


"there's too much hate in this play."

Re-write!

One
 


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 Reviews of "Lights, Camera, Action"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
From a cinemaphile, Bravo!!! Brilliant ending.
Georg

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Excellent ending; Happy Easter. R

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
If only they would One! I used to waste time seeking a good romantic , suspense or adventure film without the violence hate and vularities, but rarely found one. #xcellent poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Very good.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Powerful write One...enjoyed, write on dear friend! Happy Easter and blessings from Kentucky!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
love it!

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Very powerful and moving poem.You Draw back the blinds for everyone to see the strength of love.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Homorousoffering!!

Happy Easter to you and Yours!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
fun write1! I love the positive nature--

Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Smiles I so enjoyed your "Lights, Camera, Action" One.
Love and light to you at this very blessed time of the year.
Continued uplighting, and positive inspirations there my friend!

Take care and blessings,
From the Heart...


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