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Deads
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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We were standing
right beside them
We spoke kindly
neither said nothing
I thought ok
They looked our way
We smiled kindly
All we got was a frown

They seemed
so unhappy
I wasn't really
feeling that great
but I didn't share
their fate
Later on the same
In the party
they just sat

Wouldn't dance
They just sat
all night long
As my wife and I
danced and had fun
They didn't seem
to have none

Then they looked
at us like we
committed a crime
I try not to judge
but it seemed
they had some
real bad issues

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Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Interesting multimeaning poem. R

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
All of us are not dead. We just cannot dance on our feet anymore cause of the backaches and old age creeping in . I know that is my case. I don't do dancing when out no more. Just sit there and enjoy watching the others.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
As So Cookie Crumbles,i.e.always the bores more boring than Deads...

Kool Write Right On!

TRASK


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