Empty Dreams (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

nicely expressed Erica. Dreams do come out this way sometimes and some of them scare the h out of you. But it was only a dream, back to reality. hugs G

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

As empty as our dreams may seem to us, we can't allow ourselves to let go of them. When we do, it's all over. Great write Erica. Lisa

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

very stong... a person cannot be other then who they are no matter how others try to shape them or their world.... good write

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Oh boy Erica, what a pleasure to read a poem like this. Maybe it will always be a work in progress, as you reach for the stars and take them in your hand one by one; making beautiful poems for the world to read and enjoy. How I love your poetry! Bill

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

beutifully executed work. Profound and insightful. Sometimes, there's nothing else to do but change faces and start the journey of self again.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

I do not know what to say....this piece is outstanding. Great, wonderful and outstanding.
Allen

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Erica...masterful write....gem!!!!

Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Erica,
This is a wonderful write!
I loved it.
Thank you,
Glenna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Very deep touching write Erica!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Erica, This doesn't need any more work, it is gloriously complete!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

AN OUTSTANDING WRITE ... ERICA
EXCELLENT

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Erica, what a profound write....especially those last lines... don't think this could be changed.... excellent write...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

This one goes deep. Great write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Erica,
I could feel the depth of this one.
"Sculpted by anthers idle hand.
Not excepted as I am..
Not loved..
Not respected..
Now just dirty angel wings..
on dirty floors of dreams..
Wondering how I ever got here..
And what this life means.."
Lady peg