Opening the window
A day in the breaking
Surrounded by nature
The skylight flaming
A ripening sun, a
Light of paradise
The dew on grass
Heavens scent
Trees asleep, willows
Weep in winnowing winds
Thrilled birds trill upon
A branch in sway
Clack-arty clack of a distant train
Vapour trail in the sky
Car engine turns again
Modernity’s Shangri-La
The Moon’s adieu
Upon this morn, children’s
Laugher in scuffling pleasure
Horse chestnuts a ritual treasure
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Reviews of "A Day in the Breaking"
Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2013
Such a beautiful portrait painted with each and every word. :)
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2013
I like how this poem activates the sense of sound and touch (open window and winnowing winds) and smell (of car engines) and taste! = (just the word "ripening," even though it is the sun, we are thinking of fruit. No wonder your readers are pleasured by this writing. So am I... ~~ Diana
Andy, there is such a positive affirmation of life in this poem - I feel uplifted with renewed expectations for life - you have created a rewarding piece of reading my dear friend - I wish you love and peace - Jon Michael
What an endearing and unforgettable delight of a poem, and one that leaves the reader utterly happy!
Blessings and Love and Happy New Year and Belated Merry Christmas xo
Christine
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
love the imagery
Thanks for sharing Andy
peace be with you
William
thanks,
Gina
to beautiful days.
Lady Mary Ann
and liking it...Andy
Lady Vivian
we you sitting on your front porch?
I see you there with a glass of sweet tea
Bee Hives In The Clover Meadow
Vickie
Regis
Blessings and Love and Happy New Year and Belated Merry Christmas xo
Christine
Anna
budd
Myrna