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A Day in the Breaking
by Andy James Turner → (All Poetry by Andy James Turner)
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Opening the window
A day in the breaking
Surrounded by nature
The skylight flaming

A ripening sun, a
Light of paradise
The dew on grass
Heavens scent

Trees asleep, willows
Weep in winnowing winds
Thrilled birds trill upon
A branch in sway

Clack-arty clack of a distant train
Vapour trail in the sky
Car engine turns again
Modernity’s Shangri-La

The Moon’s adieu
Upon this morn, children’s
Laugher in scuffling pleasure
Horse chestnuts a ritual treasure












 

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 Reviews of "A Day in the Breaking"
Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2013
Such a beautiful portrait painted with each and every word. :)

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2013
I like how this poem activates the sense of sound and touch (open window and winnowing winds) and smell (of car engines) and taste! = (just the word "ripening," even though it is the sun, we are thinking of fruit. No wonder your readers are pleasured by this writing. So am I... ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 12, 2013
Great visuals for a new day!....M

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on January 11, 2013
What a perfect picture you painted with your words...what a delightful day in the making

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 10, 2013
sounds like an enjoyable day
love the imagery
Thanks for sharing Andy
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 10, 2013
Andy, there is such a positive affirmation of life in this poem - I feel uplifted with renewed expectations for life - you have created a rewarding piece of reading my dear friend - I wish you love and peace - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on January 10, 2013
Lovely imagery...oh, I miss chestnuts..none to be found hereabouts

thanks,
Gina

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on January 10, 2013
A day in breaking this morning's beauty. A sweet rendering
to beautiful days.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on January 9, 2013
A perfect day in the life!
and liking it...Andy

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on January 8, 2013
Picture postcard beautiful in the best sense; a charming poem!

Reviewed by Kathryn Perry
Reviewed on January 8, 2013
I love it!

Reviewed on January 8, 2013
you take me there Andy!!
we you sitting on your front porch?
I see you there with a glass of sweet tea

Bee Hives In The Clover Meadow
Vickie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 8, 2013
A day in the breaking is always a marvelous thing to experience. And Happy New Year, Old Chum.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 8, 2013
...want nothing to do with horses nuts...;-) e

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 7, 2013
This poem is alive from beginning to end.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 7, 2013
Lovely and engaging... ...right up my alley, when I'm not hurting from my lost love. Thank you, Andy. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 7, 2013
What an endearing and unforgettable delight of a poem, and one that leaves the reader utterly happy!
Blessings and Love and Happy New Year and Belated Merry Christmas xo
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 7, 2013
Wonderful...gives one hope for the promise of spring! Very much enjoyed...

Anna

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 7, 2013
things to love and be remembered
budd

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 7, 2013
I love this.. from beginning to end. It has a whimsical quality but also a very reflective tint to the words.. very nice!
Myrna


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