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Tyler Joseph Wiseman

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Aquarius
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Walking down the street,
laughter bubbles and froths
down the window of a faux victorian affair
until, finally settling in the gutter
flows down a rusted spilloff
.
I attempt to catch some
to carry in the golden cup of my hand,
which, already containing the wind,
dandelion wisps, a mixture of sunlight
and halogen leftovers from last night,
should make a fine feast for friends
.
Too much sex and coffee has me cranked up
like a Jester's box, taut and ready to spring
on a victim very much expecting
my poetry, which, like a cracker jack treat
is less surprise than anticipation
.
The words stick together on my tongue,
bound by the carmelized sugar of hope
daintily baked in the sun
until the inevitable metamorphosis
into the container which I carry words,
as another aquarius offering to quench thirst


Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 9/24/2003

Wonderful poem! ~Z~

Reviewed by Deborah Russell 9/24/2003

..." the golden cup of my hand" and ..."less surprise than anticipation"...

Nice turns and truths. Full of little surprises.

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield 9/24/2003

Wow! This is splendid! Great job!
- J -

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 Reviews of "Aquarius"
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
I liked this a lot.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
now this definitely surpasses second grade vernacular,doesn't it ;) i'm so impressed...

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
This is absolutely gorgeous! I found it easy to read though it's far from simple. I love it when that happens.

Adam

Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Greetings fellow AQ, great poem you penned here. G


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