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two worlds drowning
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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how many feet
between us?

twelve up
three left

measured by
some empty air
floor boards
and carpeting

sitting on a semi-circular
orange and green
to my perpendicular
brown micro suede
in front of
an eighty one inches
diagonally
to my fifty HD

hey…big up
smaller down

two butts planted
twelve odd feet apart
simultaneously
programming
nightly fantavisions

two worlds

so close
yet
so very far
apart


copyright © 2005 sara coslett

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 Reviews of "two worlds drowning"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Well this is a really fascinating write and reminds me of an old song "knock Three Times On THe Ceiling If YOu Want Me". How true it is that two people almost perfectly matched both lonely be so close yet so far a part...

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Sara,

Very well written.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Quite a statement here, Sara.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Very poignant indeed...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
Most interesting write....!!

Oh that bride or what ever on the pic looks pretty wet to me....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dan Rains (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
A bit different perhaps, but very interesting. Actually I believe it gets better each time I read it. Nice work.
Dan

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 21, 2005
very creative

William ....Love & Peace

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 21, 2005
Very clever Sara! I think your measurements are spot on for the HD TV lives that are growing ever larger as we seem to be getting ever smaller in action...superb work!

Eileen

Reviewed on November 21, 2005
Interesting write! Something unique!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2005
interesting write

captivating


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